Tnega_Terces
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Tnega_Terces13dCommented*Gag me, please. (Not, “A gag to please”, which doesn’t make sense.)
This paragraph has been deleted.- Tnega_Terces14dReplied to FrostyPaws
Eww, why would we want an ugly elf boy instead of a stunning elf woman?!?
Naturally, this was not the war hammer he left behind on Söl, but it was a much weaker backup weapon he had stored in his armour's storage space. - Tnega_Terces14dReplied to Tnega_Terces
Maybe, “She then made the blood inside the other vial flow out and float before the sitting Erik”?!?
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Inside what, it’s already outside the vial, right?!?
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How does he do this?!? Have you forgotten that the mother still can’t understand him, author-sama?!!
He relayed Elora's words to her mother, whose name he later learned was Morganae, and she led them through the forest and into a slightly darker but still eerily beautiful part of the forest. - Tnega_Terces14dCommented
No force can sever what’s been combed,
No force can sever what's combined, - Tnega_Terces14dCommented
A journey not stopped by night nor day,
A journey marked by night and day. - Tnega_Terces14dCommented
*Soul-bound partners in an eternal embrace (Fits the rhyming scheme, while also being grammatically correct!)
Soul-bound partners, forever embrace." - Tnega_Terces14dCommented
Conspiratorial, not conspirational, which isn’t a real word.
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0-10 is eleven numbers in total , since you are counting starting from zero instead of one! A bit tricky , I know, but a simple fix, and why not eleven tiers anyways?!
[There are ten Tiers of existence. Tier 0 is the weakest while Tier 10 is the strongest. You are of the weakest Tier of Existence among Demons, a 𝐓𝐢𝐞𝐫 𝟎—𝐃𝐞𝐦𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠.] - Tnega_Terces21dCommented
So which one is it, an ant, like the title says, or termite?!? You keep using the terms interchangeably despite apparently knowing that they are not…
Ch 2 Chapter 2: Poverty Has Not Afflicted My Ambition_1detailImmortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat pointsEastern · Smoke Painted - Tnega_Terces24dCommented
This is so painfully obvious that there’s no justifiable reason to include this or the following sentence. 99% of your readers will know who it is without this, and will just feel bored/insulted by being told, and for the 1% who don’t figure it out by themselves? Well, no surprise or joke was ever improved by being bluntly explained. This does your readers no favors and is just bad writing, don’t do this! Otherwise, loving this chapter and your story!!!
As for who this person was… - Tnega_Terces1mthCommented
Author, I do not know the meaning or history behind this insult, please explain!!!
Chapter 51: Hooked Fence Grass Chicken, Intense Battle [1 Update]_1 - Tnega_Terces1mthReplied to Asagrim_9
He wasn’t thanking her for just this one instance, but all her care and concern for him the many months that they’ve been here! This is the first time he’s given her any thanks, or even any acknowledgement, and considering how easily he can manufacture this pill, and the fact that he has access to a private, and free, supply of the ingredients, I’m rather disappointed that he only gave her one!
"Sigh, there are only three left. I wonder if they'll be enough," Fang Lin lamented inwardly. These pills are really running out. - Tnega_Terces5mthCommented
Paint a perfect *picture* in his mind.
He replayed the process of the fusion again and again, relying on the Origin Flame to paint a perfect in his mind. - Tnega_Terces6mthReplied to ManWithThePlan
It’s never been a question of whether or not he could become a Sky God, it’s a question of whether or not he can become the ultimate Sky God or not, and seeing how he’s only just started grasping an entirely new aspect of cultivation, there’s no way he’s going to rush things. Ryu doesn’t care about being first (unlike, maybe, you?!? 😜), what he cares about is being the G.O.A.T.
The golden road seemed to explode with a blinding light that connected the Nine Planes. In the center of it all, a man entered a woman and her feverish cries echoed. - Tnega_Terces6mthReplied to ManWithThePlan
I agree that it was added to slow things down, but I LIKE long stories, which is exactly the kind that this author writes, h should be painfully obvious from all his other works. If you don’t like long stories, then what in the world are you doing here? That’s like someone who hates murder mysteries reading Agatha Christie novels and then complaining about them. If you don’t like it, no one but you is forcing you to read it…
As they had moved, wasting time, Ryu wasn't entirely idle. He was analyzing the water vapor around him, something that came like second nature due to his Cosmic Seed. Unfortunately, because his Dao Heart was shattered, his progress was limited as though his talent was sitting behind a filter of some sort. - Tnega_Terces10mthReplied to Red_dragon
To steal their talents, maybe?!?
Even so, the more they thought about it, the more they realized the kind of precarious position Ryu was in. They were all geniuses, and they all had astounding levels of backing. The idea that someone else would target them to steal their targets never even crossed their minds because they were really only capable of seeing the world from their perspective. - Tnega_Terces1yrReplied to Karaphina
He’s not wallowing in self pity, his life is genuinely cursed! But you probably know that by now…😜
Despite his words, the undertone of sadness would never be missed by Elena. She knew her fiancé too well, well enough to know that these words were nothing more than self-mockery. - Tnega_Terces3yrReplied to Ajunta_Pal
Editor Here: Yeah, she's going to be awesome. Just wait, she's going to drive Soar absolutely insane!
{… This is going to be complicated. And difficult to get used to …}