TheRockLee

A great story with fantastic potential. The most pressing issues are the grammar and the character name. Throughout the whole story, the author has people call him Eijiro Eijirou instead of Eijirou Kirishima

the tallest ten year old I've ever heard of, but hey this is One Piece so ig it can be plausible

Yes give it to him

When I first saw this I scoffed and dismissed it but came back, read some comments and decided to take a crack at it not expecting much. I just finished reading the entire thing in one sitting. I enjoyed this story so far immensely and was very surprised by that. It definitely has it's flaws, make no mistake about that, but it's still better than 80% of the hogwash stories that Webnovel has available

My thought went to Berserk, so maybe Dragonslayer? Or the brand Gutta gets with a passive that acts similar to Roar or has something like "The more damage you take during battle the more damage you deal" and have it last until the end of that battle

SCOTLAND FOREVEEEERRRR!!!!!

I do enjoy the idea of the story, and I'm sure it'll get better in the future. My only qualm is that, it's not Jaune- It just doesn't have the same feel as him. it would have been easier had you just made it a transmigration fic, but I understand that's not a cup of tea everyone enjoys. So I can respect it, I look forward to seeing how it progresses

Didn't Naruto say he was practicing for a long time, but only managed to figure out the one technique?

An incredible fic, beautifully written and an overall masterpiece. I've never read something so genuinely moving and I can't believe it came from Webnovel of all places. Thank you Author