I wonder how they'll choose, I can't imagine many would choose to leave the main sect that offers better cultivation prospects.

*feeling

*Hao feel even

*positions in a few

Do we know what stage it's at? Maybe it's something that the system may list in the future so we can see it's slow lazy progress.

*Back then when he and *Realm he was faced

I suppose it's more of a word choice suggestion but thunder is the noise created by lighting (and thunderstrike isn't a word) maybe you were reaching for lightning strike or maybe you like it how it is. It could also read clap of thunder or thunderclap.

And now I look in the previous chapter too (you've written lighting rather than lightning to be clear)

Mistake is continued in further paragraphs

"the dark red lighting clouds"? Making it sound like mood lighting, maybe it should say lightning

*nascent soul, Chu Yang delete or reword repeated phrase

It feels wrong that the entire Half Spirit Race would abandon their ancestral home and heritage in less than a year. Having been isolated so long and being wary of strangers you would think they'd take longer to integrate far less leave their homes even if they are only going a short distance away.

*his disciples moving

Also the kingdoms ran away and relocated?

*reason, some of the sects and *decided to take Reads poorly as is, due to using "either" then only presenting one action. Leaving the second disjointed and segregated into a new paragraph.

*Not long after

I fear my message was unclear. What I intended to point out is that it is written as Shattering star sect in this paragraph rather than with the name they had decided on or that they changed it to I didn't want to tag it as a spelling mistake incase the character intentionally (or accidentally) replaced the "ed" with a "ing" while speaking casually.

I feel the servants have been snubbed, not so much as a cursory mention. Will they need reorganising like the disciples? Will they start to break through onto the path of cultivation? Will they have to be expanded so they can take care of the herb garden, larger sect and now 2 outer sects? When will Zhi Ruo ascend to become queen of the servants? So many questions, so few answers.

*had also built a

*be divided into