kharit

its an illusion of his daughter. author never said the color of her hair and eyes till now

either Blake was supposed to be Kyle or them was supposed to be him

the only thing I can use to defend the author is that as he gets stronger the points per kill lower for ones weaker than him

was this not higher? even if it wasnt it should have raised a littlw

they captured him? he seemed strong no?

I understand what you mean by this but how often do people really burn themselves with water from a shower? lol like this cant really be something most people or even a good chunk think about

it doesnt seem to really fit her character. not that we've really seen her all that much. but I have to say the thing that has stayed with me since the beginning is why she was so mad about it. the fact that he saved her afterwards and apologized always made me wonder why her reaction was so negative. if anything ambivalent seems more appropriate.

eh the only thing I dont really get has a little to do with her but not too much. I get he poured garbage on her and she should be upset but her anger towards the rogue seems a little too much. but if I really had to point something out then its the anger or danger of a rogue in general that I dont get why there is such a big response in general. it just doesnt seem to be something that would bring about such a great amount of anger or caution.

he is an idiot 🙄 that's the only answer

I always love longer chapters. they feel like they flow so much better. I dont know why tho lol