Warlordofchaos

These are not chapters they don’t even rate as paragraphs they just keep getting shorter and shorter. I like the story but when I read it I feel like I am sitting in bumper to bumper traffic so I am putting this one on the back burner and I’ll give my stones elsewhere till you stop this crap.

Okay this trying to make every chapter end with a cliffhanger is starting to piss me off [img=angry] knock it off other than that I really like this story.

To add to your list this is not shadow monarch if he’s not raising the dead as an army he is more like a lame ass Batman. Let’s start making with shadow army already

I really want to like this fan fic but all the MC is doing is costing on canon and adding a bit of dialogue. For the love of drama make a difference or make an exit stop tagging along.

Ok just read chapter 15 and author made the comment that at 16 years old the MC’s hormones are not that high 😳😱🤯😮😲 WTF most 16 year old males are trying hump anything that will hold still long enough. Besides that the story is pretty good needs some work on grammar and for the love of Mike increase the MC’s interaction with other characters and stop running away all the time.

Keep em coming great story had me laughing myself stupid. Question just how long has he been missing from school. Can’t wait till he goes back to Kuoh.

I started to read this because it was supposed to be a system fic but after 18 chapters still no system please correct the name or add the damned system no one likes false advertising.

First I agree with nightcrown leave the cinnamon roll to Bell. Second it’s your fanfic so you do you but fyi orcs are monsters in Danmachi. If you’re looking for suggestions on what famila to join Loki is fun to mess with or Hephaestus would be good or if your looking for an OC the goddess of Night Nox would be fun. [img=recommend]

Ok this started out ok but then the MC leaves before canon starts and let’s all the plot points happen the same as canon. The MC barely has any interaction with the characters you are doing a great job making this guy a non- entity.

I choose A because choosing B will just send mixed signals and make the MC look like some sort of douse bag