Ajay_raj

Review 1 Thank you so much author for finishing the story, there is no doubt that I had a lot of ups and downs while reading this novel but overall I am happy I did it cause that's how much I was invested in it. I can't believe it's your first novel, the quality of writing is really good. All the best for your future endeavours!

Thank you for the chapter! Already mentioned it before, but absolutely love this fanfiction!

Does he refer to Asuma when smoking with Hokage? What happened Did Asuma die?

Getting the second coming of Kratos vibes!

Why not offer peaceful negotiation ? Trade the divinity in the sand for the horn?

Hades helmet?

Good novel, need more like novels like this.

goosebumps

Absolutely love this novel, and I keep checking for new chapters. For anyone reading this, this is one of the very novels that has a very unique and realistic view point. it's not your average run of the mill instant power up mc, each and every decision taken is important and adds up. It is a slow burner, but TRUST ME ITS ABSOLUTELY WORTH STICKING TO THE END. Personally I don't like slow burners, I'm not sure what made me read through, the unique story setting, the realistic or different take on the shinobi ranks that you don't see. Most stories treat genin as a canon folder, which is true to a certain extent but the world of Naruto still depends on them, the capabilities of genin in comparison to ordinary people is mind blowing. Now with that aspect what about chunin, or jonin. This story brings out that perspective, it's a very real and grounded angle but one that certainly brings a fresh breath of air compared to other generic fanfictions. Thank you for a great read!

Not a fan of this story, very difficult to get into and absolutely outlandish. Lots of gaps in the plot and not even remotely logical. Might be the intention of this novel was this particular style of writing, but even if it is a slice of life there is scope for improvement.