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Author-san, Great work but please upload the chapters in order... the constant abrupt chapter changes kill the fun of reading the novel.
It really Exists 😂😂... Just 10 min walking distance from my place. try googling the name, you will find the whole website and LinkedIn
In general I like the story quite a lot and I feel that there could be a lot of potential. But one thing the author needs to work on keeping uniformity to his writing. it's really confusing and irritating when there is no consistency to when the characters are speaking and thinking, sometimes they speak under "" sometimes it's BOLD and in the recent chapters it seems they are speaking after - If there was some uniformity in that like "" for dialogue and '' for monologue and thoughts it would be way easier to read. Hopefully the author would change it in the upcoming chapters so that I can come back and edit my review.
A pretty good fanfic, unlike other fanfics that strictly try to follow the canon plot like it's not innovative yet find a good amount of stability to justify the plot progression. The characters are realistic and I would say it's one of the good fanfics. Great job author.
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