I really don't understand why so much work if you have almost 20 people who could ALONE win this "war", it wasn't exactly clear if the whole guild goes to the bigger world, because if not everyone there's no point in him creating a guild and recruiting random people, at this point in the story with so much that has already happened the plot should be completely different from the original, I think the author has the ability to distance himself from what LOC has already written and still be good and cohesive. Sorry for the rant, but it was making me sleepy rereading something I've already read but under completely different circumstances.

Estou tentando, primeira vez que escrevo algo, vou me esforçar para melhorar.

Ele pode ir pro mundo de Against The Gods, lá é relativamente fácil pegar alguns tesouros celestiais, veias de um deus maligno e linhagens de feras míticas...

changes were made? do i need to reread?

Very good story, the pace is somehow better than RSSG (although they haven't found a real challenge yet), the characters are nice, I felt that the author got too attached to the original work which brings this work closer to a Fanfic than an Original Work, I expected to see more differentiation in terms of items and future directions than can happen but the author stopped writing (I hope he returns from the bottom of my heart)

Great story so far. Please dont drop

Not that Zach hasn't played against strong teams before... It doesn't make sense that his A+ dribbling skills are below average. As the system is quantifiable it knows exactly your skill level and there is no reason to lack confidence when all your skills are above A+ (assuming the sport's peak peak is probably S+)

The problem with this argument is that Zachary has visible ways of figuring out how he's going to perform, the system doesn't show any statistics really bad enough to lack confidence, and I lack the ability to be able to see the "level" of other players.

I would love to see Zach in a special cup card in FIFA Ultimate Team (I think it was already known this year).

Atlético de Madrid is a good option between 2014-2016, in addition to the good campaigns in the Champions, he will have the rivalry with Messi and Ronaldo at his peak. In the Premier League, Tottenham and Liverpool would be good options.

only in the united states "soccer" is different from "football", in the rest of the world we call yours american football. (at least for me)

Hello, the application does not have a translation option, we use the browser's own translation option, I noticed that it was only in the last chapters of your book (316 onwards) that you have this error.

I like the novel so much that I had to use the google translator on my cell phone camera to read this, is webnovel wanting to reduce its users by putting translation blocking?

Ainda estou acompanhando, está boa porem as vezes tem umas sequências de capitulos de preenchimento (o que pra quem ta acompanhando junto com o autor é uma merda). Uma das poucas novels que eu vibrei enquanto lia um capitulo.

Estou perdido, por que ele sabe os eventos futuros até 2021??

Thanks for the chapters

I'm disappointed...

Sério cara, eu não sou um grande fã de ler sobre as partidas... mas essa esta demorando tanto que estou pensando seriamente em parar de ler se no proximo capítulo ele não tiver pelomenos o primeiro tempo.

Thanks for the chapter.

Xp