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Love the story so far don't be afraid to make an original more expansive universe ,there are many forces in the galaxy that can make the story more interesting than just the forces on earth. There are many olaces you can take the story ,whether its just plain power leveling or kingdom building it has alot of potential ...
Another route for power development would be using basic science and using the fact that as mass approaches the speed light it basically momentarily has infinite force .overcoming might and power levels with a little science ...destruction energy could destroy the force produces by this ....
A training arc then return of Natsu and the gang.
give yourself the time to write and when you focus on something that is not intended penalise yourself ,pain or something foul but non life threatening will work.in time you'll train yourself to do these things on command or you'll have to up the penalty since you've adapted already
never give up you are important we love your work and the soul that is in your writing ..find what makes you happy and pursue it until the end that is life ...talk to us in those dark days so we may shoulder some of your worries and cheer you up ..you are not alone ,you are loved ,you are adored
please i just need a hit bro ......please ...just kidding,good novel and one that makes sense regarding growth you have to work for power otherwise the power will never be your own ....you can ignore me but here are some ideas +spirit bones evolve as you fight in later chapters(not to op but scales as time goes on) +if you time skip do it in meaningfull ways that show mc character growth ..thats about it love the novel and can't wait for a new chapter
be strong bud and get well soon ,
Your stories is like crack infused fentanyl cocaine crispy fried chicken ...every time I reach the end I go to rehab to adjust to the mediocrity of society...thank you great one for gracing us with the Ambrose of the gods wrapped in the words of the tales of the dragon born...may your reign be eternal ...and please make more ...right now ....