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PrimordialGio6dReplied to MaskofgluttonyCh 30 Chapter 30: Elsewhere – Julie- PrimordialGio15dReplied to NecroanPyer
to be honest I'm not sure, i can look at incorporating it further
[Congratulations you have chosen a surname for your lineage.] - PrimordialGio27dReplied to Jaden_Wagner
fixed
[Beloved of the Void: Your affinity with the elements of the Abyss is near unmatched. You will find that the Elements of Void, Darkness, and Chaos will head your call easier.] - PrimordialGio27dReplied to Jaden_Wagner
for the ones you have been introduced to so far it's beginner, then novice, then student each one goes from I to X
Light(Beginner II) - PrimordialGio27dReplied to
ah thank you for pointing this out, yes it changed from colors. i will go back and edit the previous chapter so it matches
Light(Beginner II) - PrimordialGio27dReplied to PrimordialGio
it's just dividing 30 directly by 2 makes it look like they are giving the same :)
Seeing his essence now at 45 of 100 Rosario guessed that each animal gave him 15 essences as he had gained 30 from these two. Satisfied with the outcome, Rosario again began his trek through the forest towards his original goal of the mountains. As he traveled now his mind was awash with thoughts on how much essence he needed to get to level 1 and how many animals would it take for him to kill. What was the Evo 0 number and what did it represent? Immersed in his thoughts Rosario continued his hike until daylight was almost gone. - PrimordialGio27dReplied to Jaden_Wagner
level 2 and 4 gave a total 30 essence but it wasn't the same, one gave 20 the other 10
Seeing his essence now at 45 of 100 Rosario guessed that each animal gave him 15 essences as he had gained 30 from these two. Satisfied with the outcome, Rosario again began his trek through the forest towards his original goal of the mountains. As he traveled now his mind was awash with thoughts on how much essence he needed to get to level 1 and how many animals would it take for him to kill. What was the Evo 0 number and what did it represent? Immersed in his thoughts Rosario continued his hike until daylight was almost gone. - PrimordialGio27dReplied to Jaden_Wagner
i promise mc is not dumb, just preoccupied with surviving that he isn't seeing the pattern yet
There was an extra 5 essence that he didn't expect to be there. Figuring out that he got twenty from the snake Rosario tried redoing the math in his head to figure out how much essence from each animal he was getting but he couldn't figure it out. He figured he definitely must be getting different amounts for each animal, he just had to figure out how the different amounts were calculated. - PrimordialGio27dReplied to Jaden_Wagner
good question, his affinities do get stronger but as he awakened this it gave him those affinities currently. like all systems exaggerations are in the explanation. basically it unlocks his potential to grow the affinity to a very high level
[Beloved of the Void: Your affinity with the elements of the Abyss is near unmatched. You will find that the Elements of Void, Darkness, and Chaos will head your call easier.] - PrimordialGio28dReplied to Lord_of_Endless
so in this paragraph she is just spouting off a few. it doesnt follow the order specified above it's a paraphrase. the order you have is much more like it except an earl is also added in. you will see this as the story goes further however it's a while till anyone is even a knight from this chapter
"Let me finish before you ask. We cannot interfere, removing whole species from their planets and relocating them is already more interference than we would like. When you are teleported, you will have the equipment you requested but also you will be given a summoning gate Crystal. This crystal is extremely important as the Summoning Gate it creates is extremely vital for your survival. You will be given ten imbued Vellums to begin, just as everyone else. These vellums can be thrown into the portal to summon your citizens, the gems will call forth the souls of those who came before you in this Universe. These people are called Summons and will be your citizens and loyally follow you, however how they follow you is a direct reflection of how you treat them. Once they come out of the portal, they are living and breathing again, with or without you. It's on you to be sure they want to keep you around and leading them. If you do not want the responsibility of the summoning portal, or yours is taken, then you will become what is referred to as an Initiated. Those who keep their portals and develop are considered by the system to be Nobles. Your starting Noble status would be a Squire. This comes with extra perks and as a "Noble" you can advance to become a Knight, Baron, King, Emperor, Planetary King, and even higher. When you place your portal the system will update your personal status sheet(PSS) with your nobility status." - PrimordialGio28dCommented
After thinking things over I believe i might go with posting here for only free chapters. however on patreon I'll be releasing early chapters, for now i would only have ten chapters ahead but i will be looking into 20 and 40 ahead. if this is what I decided on I will begin posting chapters on here again on the 29th of April
Ch 25 Chapter 25: Signing & The cave… again. - PrimordialGio1mthReplied to PrimordialGio
Here is the clan symbol
The symbol was centered on what looked like a Lugged Hewing Spear, however the whole spear was made of gold and the spear tip was a 5-pointed star. Where the Shaft began were protrusions pointing out either side of the shaft and behind these protrusions was a small sun. Crossing with the middle spear a third of the way down the shaft were another two spears each at a 45-degree angle. The heads of these two spears were a trident with the outer spikes having a scythe-like curve to them. Halfway down the middle spears shaft was another set of spears coming out at 45-degree angles and going across the whole symbol. All the crossing spears were held by 6 obsidian black arms that went to the mid forearm. On either side of the spears were golden Greek sculpture heads facing out and there were 6 golden wings, 3 on either side of the symbol, and 4 black wings intertwined with the golden wings. (Going to attach Imaging. Or trying to at least.) - PrimordialGio1mthReplied to Maskofgluttony
That is something I have looked into for the future. I was not sure how well it would be received so currently I do not have a huge back fill of chapters(only about 5). I am working on making more of a stock pile and doing it that way. I have seen other authors do it that way and might try implementing it slowly over time as I build more chapters. I will take this suggestion to mind seriously because i do like sharing my work.
Ch 25 Chapter 25: Signing & The cave… again. - PrimordialGio1mthReplied to Maskofgluttony
I apologize, forgot to attach it. I will figure out how to add it today. I'll just reply to this comment again when it's uploaded.
The symbol was centered on what looked like a Lugged Hewing Spear, however the whole spear was made of gold and the spear tip was a 5-pointed star. Where the Shaft began were protrusions pointing out either side of the shaft and behind these protrusions was a small sun. Crossing with the middle spear a third of the way down the shaft were another two spears each at a 45-degree angle. The heads of these two spears were a trident with the outer spikes having a scythe-like curve to them. Halfway down the middle spears shaft was another set of spears coming out at 45-degree angles and going across the whole symbol. All the crossing spears were held by 6 obsidian black arms that went to the mid forearm. On either side of the spears were golden Greek sculpture heads facing out and there were 6 golden wings, 3 on either side of the symbol, and 4 black wings intertwined with the golden wings. (Going to attach Imaging. Or trying to at least.) - PrimordialGio1mthReplied to Romance_guyCh 25 Chapter 25: Signing & The cave… again.
- PrimordialGio1mthReplied to Arxamare
So many of what?
"Stand up, I am not into that 'My Lord' shit. My name is Rosario, what is yours?" - PrimordialGio1mthReplied to DevilGod_of_ChaosCh 16 Chapter 16: History
- PrimordialGio1yrReplied to thewhitesnowCh 242 Gift of the Phantom
- PrimordialGio1yrCommented
why does his status not seem to add up. 20 total power at white, plus forty power at yellow plus 3 power for every 1 point in purple, and based on nylas stats it should be 5 power for every black point in total. at max power at purple he should have had 15 innate power 20 white, 40 yellow, 3x40 purple at 120 for a total of 15+180 at peak purple. based on what shown of nylas stats that each black point is worth 5 per stat that's another 110 power. he should be at 15+290. am I wrong or missed somthing
Ch 242 Gift of the Phantom