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Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthReplied to Ghostplay2011- Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthCommented
If it was me, I would kill him after finishing my lessons from Salaark, this guy is a mass murderer who thinks just because "im no angry no more, me happy" that he can just walk away and forget about the things he had done? F off, Salaark is a hypocrite and Balkor needs to get what he deserves With their logic, i can be a mass murderer and be forgiven just because "me no angry no more, me happy" and get away with it. The people he killed need justice, Yes some people he killed deserves it but how about the ones that doesnt? Worried that killing him will create another Balkor? TF?! how about the Balkors HE created when he massacred people in the kingdom?!
Yet after so many years what was left of the embers of her grudge had almost been put out after meeting Balkor in person so she easily ignored those feelings. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthReplied to sem_sentindo
what logic are you talking about?
'How would things be different today if I had killed him years ago? Would have I created one more Balkor or even two?' The Sekhmet thought while studying the deep bond of the children with their father and reconsidering the weight of taking even a single life. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthCommented
How about the Balkors HE created? The family and friends he killed?! The amount of hatred he created if more than he ever had! One Balkor?! how about the THOUSANDS he created in the kingdom?! do they not matter??
'How would things be different today if I had killed him years ago? Would have I created one more Balkor or even two?' The Sekhmet thought while studying the deep bond of the children with their father and reconsidering the weight of taking even a single life. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthCommented
What? who the F wrote the recent chapters? "We are not to directly meddle with mortals" this paragraph is literally contradicting the "lesson" Salaark gave to Scarlett, it is literally said here that she freaking controls the dessert
Yet Salaark's will was uncontested and no one dared to speak against her decision except that maybe once a year when she allowed her Feathers to advance suggestions to improve the quality of life in the Desert. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthCommented
hypocritical, she literally rules and control the desert
"Exactly." Salaark nodded. "A Guardian can't inspire people. We are too powerful, our existence too overbearing to arouse more than despair and subservience. Mortals can only be inspired by other mortals. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen7mthCommented
but you sure give them knowledge to people you favor, what happened to: "Keeping the balance"
"It's the same reason I took in the mages like Lith and Balkor that the rest of Mogar considered monsters and gave them a place to stay. A Guardian can't just hoard knowledge and power for itself. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen8mthReplied to xXTheVigilantXx
there was but he rejected them and lied that only very recent and specific people can be risen and that its not revival
"As for your Abomination side, the story of the ghost girl and your chains has spread like wildfire despite our best efforts to cover it up. Also, don't forget that Meln ruled the Courts for a while. Whatever he knew about you, they also probably know." - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen8mthCommented
"He managed..." author please hire a proofreader as soon as possible, reading this is very frustrating
"It's even worse. You managed to reach the level of a Sword User, somehow, but not even a single drop of mana can be felt from that child." - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen8mthCommented
"my sword and the professor's"?
"You're too much. Is there that much of a difference between your sword and the professor's?" - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen8mthReplied to TheAncientOnell
because he doesnt want to and his special skill is enough, he has 10 years left and if he starts learning magic or aura, he might not have enough time
According to the rules of Philleon Academy, students couldn't leave the grounds on weekdays. Ronan decided to focus on academy life until the weekend arrived. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen8mthReplied to TheAncientOnell
how so?
Ronan honestly had no intention of becoming a member of the Acalusia family. Even if his feelings changed later on, it would still be a decision he'd need to carefully consider. - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen1yrReplied to Gikolo_Jeffchoszen
either way, they should fire this butler
"Heavenly Lion Group, Heavenly Lion Group." Mark mumbled to himself twice, "Forgive this old servant for being slow-witted, but where does this group of Heavenly Lions come from?" - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen1yrCommented
this butler does not know a top organization in one of their branches? this butler seemed to be not a handler of their business BUT in a few paragraphs, it is shown that he IS! this butler is either lazy or incompetent on his job small businesses are very important to manage, even if individually they are useless to a big league, together they play a big role to your business!
"Heavenly Lion Group, Heavenly Lion Group." Mark mumbled to himself twice, "Forgive this old servant for being slow-witted, but where does this group of Heavenly Lions come from?" - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen1yrReplied to TetractysCh 1211 My House of Horrors
- Gikolo_Jeffchoszen2yrCommented
my god, time skip left and right! already a sign of an inexperienced writer
Few days passed with Cairo using almost all of his time to train his Sand Guard skill and he eventually succeeded - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen2yrCommented
yep, i already saw this coming, this novel is nothing more than a power fantasy isnt it?
The admiration of Cairo towards Kira grew once more and he immediately tried it. What he doesn't know was that it was him that shocked Kira a lot - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen2yrCommented
Tell us how it's done! How do we know that what the MC is doing is amazing when we dont even know what he did!
After explaining some things, Kira asked Cairo to follow her outside to properly demonstrate her magic - Gikolo_Jeffchoszen2yrCommented
let me guess, the MC just gets it and be considered a genius
After the recap, Kira started explaining things about sand magic. It wasn't actually her forte but compared the comprehension she has to what Cairo has, the distance is mountain apart