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Desiplexxx11mthCommentedCh 37 The Night Before the Promised Day Comes- Desiplexxx11mthCommented
partha means friend/ companion
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i love this
Cien did not want to sell his items at a low price. He knew the value of each item he had. Moreover, his creations, the Fire Glove and Bluminous, were already like treasures to him. He did not want to sell them cheaply just because of a mission from his phone. - Desiplexxx1yrCommented
how does he know about "adrenaline" ?
"No. We can't withdraw. That's what Amenheratf wants. If we withdraw now, the battle will end today. Our soldiers are too exhausted and once they return to camp the adrenaline will run out and exhaustion will settle in. By tomorrow the Adhanian will have built forts and just wait for the main army. So we need to win now. And we need the mobile cavalry to do it. Now go and take charge of the Sycanians, cavalry commander or not." Agapios commanded in an absolute voice. - Desiplexxx1yrCommented
like him
As much as James wanted to help her, he doesn't have the time to try and use actors with unproven success. As much as he had cheats, he has no way to turn a nobody into a star. He had enough trouble using PROVEN actors to make a good movie, much less unreliable ones. - Desiplexxx1yrReplied to AuthorsDread
- Desiplexxx1yrReplied to Ryukurou
I really like that, everything you wrote has their reason and is tied to something. Great stuff. It will be great, if mc can unearth someone to fight beside him and become his best buddy. Who is not by the way in the book "hero has returned". To show some wasted talent the earth has and how far can they go.With the right friend beside can make a monster. A story line connected to the main plot, but outside the academy and its students, will probably give us a new and fresh perspective of the outside world with new dynamic characters. it's just a suggestion. I am liking this so far.
Now onto the important part. Since, the next arc will explain a lot about world building and the characters, I want you guys to give your opinions and suggestions for the story ^^ - Desiplexxx1yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: Son of the Ravenmoon V
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300 m a lot
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same here
I found that I was slowly leaning towards becoming a ninja, especially when I thought about what a shame it would be if I didn't. I mean, I had so much future knowledge, not just about the plot, but the characters, techniques, and events that would transpire. This opportunity was unique to me and me alone, which boosted my motivation in wanting to be a ninja. Overall, a ninja seemed to be the path I was heading towards. - Desiplexxx1yrCommentedCh 15 Chapter 15. New Start
- Desiplexxx1yrCommentedCh 10 Chapter 10. Nimbus 2001
- Desiplexxx2yrReplied to KingJoker
I like having mystery and adventure....discovering new island that canon never goes to. I think most fun being a pirate should be discover buried treasure , discovering something new and exciting. Explore the unknown. You pick up crew by torture or saving them. That is good but I think to build up trust they have to go through something unknown, unpredictable and scary......why rush....[img=recommend]
Ch 31 Slave Messiah - Desiplexxx2yrCommented
this is how it should be good job author
"Ok! Enough! Ophil, I want your brother from the Institute in here tomorrow, to teach this goddamn inquisitive boy. If this keeps on I won't have a hair left on my head. " Tam yelled out, thinking Ophil was still in the next room. - Desiplexxx2yrCommented
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"It's Alfred, Dean Alfred Petticoat." - Desiplexxx2yrCommentedCh 11 Davy Back Fight (Finale)
- Desiplexxx2yrCommentedCh 59 Chapter 56: Eleven Seconds