The exclumation point is meant to be a question mark

Uh is meliodas assult mode here?? Or Just like outraged demon mode that he went when he broke out of the necklase he was chaptured in, in the first season of SDS!

I hate grimm at this point. Your story is good everything oTher than grimms personality that is. I cant stand him as a person and im more than likely going to drop the story cya.

I haven’t read this story in a while so i am completely confused on what your trying to say

unpopular opinion but it tends to get annoying and get blown out of proportion.

Bruh 😑

they intervene with feneral but not the ppl Grimm nearly killed?

I dint undertsand how grim is allowed to get away with this like oof. I wouldnt be Surprised if he got kicked out of The magic Knights (can that even happen like has it haPpend in the manga?)

good chapter, but does grim care for anyone in the sense that he would get worried or mad if they got hurt or something. And what his end goal after becoming the strongest? And character development?

I think it mainly applies to the fact they had really good teachers Zoro, Luffy, and Sanji. Also their will comes into play not necessarily who thier parents are.

Hopefully he doesn’t win if he does I call BS but good job with the chapter

People are idiots sometimes. Your story is good and unique and interesting. just try not taking all reviews to heart. And good luck

Im annoyed at that buggy keeping his stUff secret like not evem made annoyed. I just made myself excited and u Crushed that excitement like bruhhh 😭😩😂

can you make the mc of your big story dark or villainy or like not in fairy tail?

Slightly confused. Does buggy himself know the theoretical process of the six powers but wants a demonstration to probably learn it? Also with observations haki u could just make one of buggies men try to hit him while he blind folded thats how luffy learned

Ah ok then, how many times a week do u update?

it's pretty interesting right now. The only problem is that no vice-admirals are in the east blue. Also what happened to Zoro's swords?

You ok my guy?

Can u put an image of the ship or like the closet thing that resembles it?

Bruh idk about u but that soundS like my best friend