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Demavend

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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
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    I'm quite a bit surprised by how much I'm enjoying this story. I definitely got what I expected, but I also got a bit more as well. I've only read the first volume, and I definitely rate what I've read as above average. There aren't too many issues with grammar/mechanics of the writing, and a couple instances of using the wrong word that is similar in spelling but different in meaning. One thing I particularly enjoy is how Nux actually drives the plot forward, and I'm not just talking about the spicy scenes. It's nice to have a character with goals and objectives. I'm not sure how things turn out with the ladies of the harem later, but I do have a criticism that they don't seem to be particularly active in whatever goals that they might have. Seeing as our perspective character is primarily Nux, it's not always the easiest to show something like that, and it may not be entirely necessary for this type of a story, however, as an addict of reading, and a lover of writing it's always nice to see storytelling fundamentals improve. Overall, what I have read thus far does a good job to keep me interested in reading more and seeing more of what this world has to offer as well as how our MC will interact with it. I'm curious to see how he might deal with set backs. What he can gain from failure. How I can cheer for him when he succeeds. Also, of course how exciting the spicy scenes can get.

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    Supreme Harem God System
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
    Commented
    "It's me, Dio"
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    Supreme Harem God System
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
    Replied to FunnyBuns

    All netorare is cheating, not all cheating is netorare.

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    Way To Be The Evil Emperor
    · Manga Hero of Times
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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
    Replied to FunnyBuns

    I know very well what Netorare is mate. That moment comes close. It is not the bone fide thing.

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    Way To Be The Evil Emperor
    · Manga Hero of Times
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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
    Replied to ELord

    I guess? It doesn't continue like that though.

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    Way To Be The Evil Emperor
    · Manga Hero of Times
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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
    Replied to FunnyBuns

    That is not correct usage of the word netorare. First off it was pretty well in character for her to spite him like that for completely disappearing like he did, and second she has mostly only used him as a way to cultivate her power. She lusts for him because he's hot. She doesn't really love him.

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    Way To Be The Evil Emperor
    · Manga Hero of Times
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  • Demavend
    Demavend1yr
    Posted

    This is a story that just gets better as time goes on. The MC is very intelligent and cunning, however, that doesn't mean he wins all the time which keeps the story from growing stale, and even some of his victories come at a cost. He grows stronger as time passes and comes up against harder and harder challenges that test his limits every time. I think I have reread this from the beginning at least five times. Every time I fully enjoy it. It may not be quite a masterpiece, but I am tempted to call it one with the quality of storytelling that is there.

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    Way To Be The Evil Emperor
    · Manga Hero of Times
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented
    Gu Changge couldn't help but show an inexplicable smile as he watched the show with great interest, hidden outside the palace.
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    I Am The Fated Villan (mtl)
    Eastern · LeeOn
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    Ugh... teenagers!

    "If you don't leave with me, then I will forcefully bring you away! Unlike Gu Changge, I will never force you to do something you don't like."
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    I Am The Fated Villan (mtl)
    Eastern · LeeOn
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    I thought that was pointing to the previous elder that passed away... Maybe I misread?

    [VILFIC: there's a mistake in the previous chapters where it mentioned that the Taixuan Supreme Elder was a half-step False God. He was half-step Conferred Lord.]
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    I Am The Fated Villan (mtl)
    Eastern · LeeOn
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    Oh no! He's hot!

    I Became Handsome, I Became Stronger!
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    Funny how at one point his defensive techniques were the most lacking.

    "This rascal Fang Yuan is too good at turtling up, how can we kill him?" Demon Immortal Qi Jue asked with a tone that contained anger and frustration.
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    Yeah pretty sure Fang Yuan broke her free from fate.

    Feng Jin Huang said: "If all this is predestined by fate, then… I do not believe in fate!"
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    W-wha?

    "This is my specialty, fried centipede."
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    Yo momma!

    "Your mother is sincere!" Sixth Hair cursed.
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    Absolutely brilliant, you don't match your enemy's pace. You push them match yours.

    However, Fang Yuan's methods could be described with one word — slow.
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Replied to Whimsikun

    They are both peak rank 4

    Pan Ping was adamant on recruiting more members into their alliance, Chang Biao laughed as he said vaguely: "I have plans for this already, it will take effect in the next few days."
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Replied to Rey_Senpai

    You should check out Reverend Insanity too if you like this kind of MC.

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    I Am The Fated Villan (mtl)
    Eastern · LeeOn
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    I hate to say this, but....

    Li Xian immediately felt a fire burning near his crotch.
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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  • Demavend
    Demavend2yr
    Commented

    I think sunk cost fallacy is going to be settling in right about now.

    In this six hours, Bai clan had sacrificed tens of outstanding Gu Masters, and even three elders were injured.
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    Reverend Insanity
    Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
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