Demavend

Would not be the first time that building got burned down.

So far, I think I like this one more, but your other novel is super fun as well.

As if such petty boundaries are going to stop his love.

IKR?

I think the use of the word "memories" is a bit awkward here. It's functional and gets the point across, but since this is something neither he nor the original Adrian possess as an ability perhaps "understanding" or the phrase "he had an epiphany" would be more accurate.

I'm a bit scared to see what this sword will look like at full power with those abilities.

Chicken Soup for the soul.

Well she's going to be completely spoiled.

I think it's classified as incomplete because whomever is delivering this to him through the system is still in the middle of writing it for him.