shut the f**k up bot

don't listen to this person below me, it's a bot.

what to the other chapters?

Great job! I hope to see more in the future.

Great job again with this chapter. I hope to see more in the future.

I love this book. Great Job! Hope to see more in the future.

Its a great book

Great Job! It has a great start so far. I would love to see more of it in the future.

I thought this was a fantasy like earth without the technology like phones and etc.

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

Third

why is it always harem? why can't it be one person, not multiple people?

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Great job!

I thought this chapter was great with the pace of flow for the chapter! And the characters history and personality are really laid out with characters progress with story! The story is really entertaining to read and enjoy! Excellent Job!

I think have to reread all this because it's been a long time and I forgot what going on actually.

she a psychopath that kills people for the littles things, what do you not understand?

no keep her in the sea

I think you forgot to finish this sentence.

This really great work! I love the way you explained how much pain she was going through so could I feel what she felt. And I hope to see more in the future.