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un_Talented

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Writing some BS, boring stuff. It's mainly focused on world-building and idk bout my other novels.

2019-04-19 JoinedUnited States
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  • un_Talented
    un_Talented3yr
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    I feel like I'm ahead of the game by playing EU4 and knowing geographically where these clans are historically.

    Ch 18 Unyielding Spirits : Compromise
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    Nobunaga Oda's Isekai Cultivation Experience
    Fantasy · GloriousRightFoot
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  • un_Talented
    un_Talented3yr
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    Ok, I'm not a writer but I do have a few ideas regarding the next steps in this novel. Obviously, choose whichever idea you want and run with it in any way you want to if you even pick any idea at all. 1. Setting up and resolving character flaws with Vahn. There are a few ways to set this up canonically but I'll just dive into the basic idea quickly; Vahn (and his close partners) come to the understanding that the flaws in his character are never fully exposed nor pressured in their entirety. The reason for this is because his powers are too great to choose the hard way over the easy way. So, with help from Sis, they erase and/or disable his OP'ness and send him into a new world blind and will work in the background to pressure him into impossible situations to force him to make the tough decisions. [This idea has the benefit of not only growing Vahn's character but also pitting him against the people he loves, and also it will allow his family to experience the conflict of doing harm onto those you love for the sake of love] 2. Fun but not really that character focus'y idea. Vahn always enters another world and breaks and molds that world to fit with his own ideals, what if we switch that on its head. Vahn has to create a balanced world of both good and evil without direct influence while (isekai'd) characters are sent into his creation with their own ideals and try to mold it to their morals. This idea has a few flaws and bonuses, first flaw; real difficult to create a brand new world that doesn't break its own rules. Second flaw: Vahn doesn't really become the protagonist in this world after he has 'set up all the pieces' because the characters that come into the world are the main focus of conflict. First bonus: The side characters can have fleshed out character arcs (which you can sell as side stories on P*tr3on). Second Bonus: The story ends with unique symmetry (idk if that's the correct word), you've been placing Vahn in different worlds for conflict but now he is the one in charge of his own situation. 3. Tier 7-9 being realise the trajectory Vahn is on and decide to interfere, (I don't know how those tiers work so it might not even make sense canonically so throw away this idea if that's true). Beings realize what's happening and decide to impede Vahn, but not directing but instead by going to his past and trying to change the events that happened there so that his personality itself changes, and he no longer wants to climb the tiers and threaten their place. This idea has the bonus of Vahn has been taking care of his family the entire time, but what happens when Vahn no longer has the drive nor personality to try to continue with his plans. So his family now has to take up the slack where Vahn has left it, and also fight with him if the changes to his personality are drastic enough. 4. Random fight idea: A god of "no possibilities" (Vahn's direct opposite) intercepts Vahn's path and tries to shut his whole operation down. 5. Vahn travels to a higher-tiered soul's world, and it's empty and desolate. And he has to investigate the ruins of its universe to try to uncover what could have happened to eradicate such a strong being. This is a great set up for a "final boss" or whatever, it allows Vahn to fight strong enemies that have survived the "Cataclysm" and he can't use OP investigative abilities inside the world of a former higher-tiered being. 6. Personally, I would enjoy Vahn going to an eastern world, like what Fenrir went to in the side story. I dislike the often-repeated stereotypes in those stories so seeing Vahn destroy one of those worlds would be a nice catharsis, at least for me. I can probably think up a few more if you'd like, I world build in my off time so I've come up with a lot of ideas. I don't really feel like having to type all of them down though. But if you want you can message me and we can talk more. I've been reading this story for a long time. It's my favorite Web Novel and I'm a P*

    Ch 1979 Putting it all on the Table
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    Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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  • un_Talented
    un_Talented3yr
    Commented

    I wonder if Voldy-has-no-snort will try to kidnap one of Aedan's friends' parents to try to manipulate them into betraying him.

    Ch 133 Ch. 133 A bit of fun and a lot of fun
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    Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
    Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
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