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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
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    Congrats on 1900 chapters! 100 more to 2000, which is crazy. Also as usual Kireina was epic.

    Ch 1900 The New Primordial Ruler Of The Maxima Universe, Kireina!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
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    Congrats on 1800 chapters!

    Ch 1800 Null's Bone Fragment & Evolving Bubu
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
    Replied to Kirito_Tazu

    I’m lvl15

    "Damn, the PPAP guy just called me Kid." Huo Yuhao cursed in this situation. "Anyway, I don't wanna, old man."
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    My Power is Upgrading Everything (Rewrite)
    Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
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    Merry Christmas! Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 1779 Sadistic Maniac
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
    Commented

    Congrats on 1700 chapters!

    Ch 1700 Creating Devastating Abilities
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
    Posted

    I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!

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    Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
    Commented

    Congrats on 1500 chapters! Looking forward to seeing some of the characters from your other novels!

    Ch 1500 Time To Bite My Way Through!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
    Commented

    Congrats on Chapter 1400! Awesome fights as always and go slime family!

    Ch 1400 [Supreme Wars: Act I] 41/?: The Fury Of The Gale Emperor!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback1yr
    Commented

    Guubo really just slurped this god up like he was eating some good noodles

    SLURP
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    Realm core OP

    Ch 1322 Demonic Tower Lord Authority And Universal Library Of Knowledge!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    I’m really curious as to what evolution has the world will so scared that it potentially messed with the evolution and divine trial

    Ch 1304 Evolving And... What?!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapters! Great read as always.

    Ch 1300 I Don't Know What To Say
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    Epic of Caterpillar
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    People get too stuck in a certain mindset about romantic interaction/partners on this app/site and when the author diverges from what they thought would be written they get salty. Still loving the story regardless!

    If this were a web novel, many readers would quit as they say "oh no, the book is absolutely ruined, I've read such an intricate story all about other things than just Yuri, yet I shall drop it now because Yuri is no more, even though all her women are still present and taking active roles! Bye!", like damn, imagine reading a story and actually just dropping it when a little thing happens.
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Replied to SamiOyakodonLover

    Freya & Ishtar wish to know your location.

    The Liquid Viagra plan was a go.
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    My life in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · IronOwl
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    Once again Pancakes shows their shocking comprehension of the Dao of cliffhanger!

    Ch 1107 A New Supreme Deity Emerges!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    1100 chapters!!! Cant wait to see Kireina’s reaction to the new supreme goddess!

    Ch 1100 Rank 2 Supreme Goddess Evolution
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    Ah I see that pancakes has fully comprehended the grand cosmic dao of cliffhangers….

    Ch 1082 The Amazing Effects Of The New Dao
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    I dont have a favorite chapter or arc, however what I can say is that this novel has throughly enraptured my attention. The way that our dear caterpillar Kireina has progressed, built a family, woven herself into the world of Gensis and the larger universe has been an amazing and awesome journey to follow along. Pancakes all that I can say is thank you for sharing your ideas and creativity that have brought this novel to life and continuing to post content consistently. I cannot wait to see what volume 2 holds for Kireina and her family. Congrats on finishing volume 1 and looking forward for more to come.

    Ch 1062 [The Fated Holy War] 50/50: The Rise Of The 8th Supreme Goddess!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    Pancakes, all that I can say is congrats on 1000 chapters! I found this novel with just about 50 published chapters and have been reading since then! Its been awesome to see you grow and improve as a writer. Thank for you the amazing content you’ve written. I cant wait for the next 1000 chapters. Congrats once again on the crazy milestone of 1000 chapters!

    Ch 1000 Ranking Up Twice In A Single Chapter
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • ottopayback
    ottopayback2yr
    Commented

    3 chapters till 1000! Thats crazy!

    Ch 997 Rank 4 Great Goddess, Evolution Once More!
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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