daniel_rahn

Gotta say this bro, really like the concept and development so far, i wonder what type of warp power mc has, or what kind of entity make this happend to let the primarchs be so obssesed to what is a normal man in first sight. Mc has something that is doing this. Anyway love the chapter keep the good work

So epic man, Love to see mc helping the guild grow and grow stronger while getting connections for himself. Also finally we get to see harin again, now their marriage its closer since mc already did what he need to do and now there is only aLduin left, and from there things will only escalate even more. If they want free time to do that its now, also i can already imagine harin bumping into the mara priest and pulling mc to the temple after hearing his preach. Lets be honest, after soo much time apart from mc, and with alduin on the horizon. I cant see harin not pulling the trigger

Nice thx for the chapter bro, cant wait to see the aftermath of the harleem incident. Keep the good work man

Thx for the chap bro, tho i w9nt lie and aid im not dissapointed about how lazy was the writing when it comes to add Neo to the harem. Hppe you explain that later

Hahaha oh man gotta love bra being jealous of caulifla 🤣 i dont know what will happend to be honest, but i love the drama. In one moment evweything was normal, in the next one goten has caulifla attached to goten's wrist. Also black goten is a really interestibg idea, i just hope that goten's body belonged to the og goten instead of mc's alternate counterpart

I really hope Morticia became more relevant for the story. Not just a casual night stand that will be barely mentioned off screen. She could be in mc's adventures not only the ones from the show but in other worlds too. Lets remember she is used to that crazy kind of life. Having her as a more romantic and relevant waifu that stays with mc and helps him should be fitting for her It would be a waste not to do that

Gotta be honest i didnt think i would comwback to this novel due to how many characters i would have to keep up and im noyñt horny enpugh to read 150+ chaps of pure smut. BUT i really loved the idea to add a female morty kn the harem. Really like the selfcest scene

Good thing mc is aware that his identity is useless by now, the good thing is that he is an omega mutant, growing in power, resources and inteligenece. Under the protection of tony stark. By the time the bazillion of mutant enemies knock his door (half of them from the government) he will be simply too much for them. Love the fact he is helping bruce too. Hopefully bruce will soon control hulk like canon too and i also hope we wont see she hulk here

Ehhh not a fan of rio if am honest, she is to overrated, i rather focusing on other wholesome and relevant female love interest peter has like ailver sable, kitty pryde, rougue, etc.

Good, honestly i think artemis is a perfect love interest for mc and he doesnt need more drama or girls after all he hadbeen through