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What was that? Did you go back to the original story? Don't destroy your story, it was doing very well.
What year does the story take place? How old is Mc? Tell us more details, right now he's just an arrogant guy who doesn't have a background story, or thoughts, or anything that tells about him.
MC x Cat
What is the age difference between him and Sheldon? Based on the series it should be 6 or 7 years.
A great story so far.
One question, who is smarter, him or Sheldon? For me you are portraying an intelligent and wise Sheldon, another question is whether he knew the plot.
Is Sheldon's technical advice his? It doesn't make any sense, he understands about psychological advice and understands more about electronic disposition than someone who has worked for years.