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Wolk
- 24_hour_coffee4 days agoCommented
What was that? Did you go back to the original story? Don't destroy your story, it was doing very well.
- 24_hour_coffee6 days agoCommented
What year does the story take place? How old is Mc? Tell us more details, right now he's just an arrogant guy who doesn't have a background story, or thoughts, or anything that tells about him.
- 24_hour_coffee6 days agoCommented
MC x Cat
- 24_hour_coffee6 days agoCommented
What is the age difference between him and Sheldon? Based on the series it should be 6 or 7 years.
- 24_hour_coffee7 days agoCommented
A great story so far.
- 24_hour_coffee8 days agoCommented
One question, who is smarter, him or Sheldon? For me you are portraying an intelligent and wise Sheldon, another question is whether he knew the plot.
- 24_hour_coffee8 days agoCommented
Is Sheldon's technical advice his? It doesn't make any sense, he understands about psychological advice and understands more about electronic disposition than someone who has worked for years.