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goody two shoes
Beta MC Alert. MC is portrayed as a top of the top in business world but has no clue about woman. Also, idk why he is being such a pussy, just do it you cuck. Plus MC is such a pushover that keeps on getting slapped but still gave them golds and gifts for nothing but bulshit. Overall, interesting story with beta mc that really does not deserve on what he had gotten at all. Not surprised if someday his wife cheats on him but he'll keep on forgiving her.
Oho the typical Japanese mc trope. Beta male...
why does he keeps on giving things for free
Character is nonexistant, mc is weak. Nothing to talk about here. Author keep trying to make mc perfect but that's so cringe. mc has no personality
bro is it a she or he make your decision
cringe but ok
please don't change the pov as you like. give a signal or something. another thing is I know you wanna make it funny but please don't make MC dumb like this. it doesn't feel like a 27 years old with these amount of stupidity. a really interesting plot tho!!!
interesting story. But it feels kinda weird when you mix the pronous his her she him.