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A Trained betrayed assassin and a emanator of nihility yet he doesn't kill people after his life? not very believable
Its been great so far. I'd say the only "criticisms" I have is the ptsd/trauma gets a little bit repetitive in the early chapters only because it feels like each episode is the same and the words both he and the people around him are the same but that could be realistic for ptsd irl im just not knowledgeable enough to know so if its normal disregard what I said and I'd like to see abit more shinji vs kaiju which i already assume is upcoming anyway keep up the good work
I think it depends on how he copes because j know some people completely shut down when confronted with their trauma where as others in war situations might prefer being surrounded by something they know rather than the world they don't
I wonder if he might try to return to the breach temporarily to relieve "stress" since its probably comfortable returning to something familiar where he can let loose but its also the source of his trauma so it's a double sided blade and might be worse or if he might try to return there permanently with how overwhelmed he is currently and how no one understands what he's been through
I expected the burst of anger to be earlier and the last log to be something like pure apathy just dead quiet no expression like a corpse
Yeah I disagree with sparing bandits and with making Kakashi a seasoned trained killer of what? 30+ years just knock them out he clearly killed on the train and these bandits aren't any better
I think blonde hair would of been better considering he's German right? I assumed he looked similar to Johan Liebert
What's even the point of adding any love there if you are just gonna end up handing her over to draco?
Is he gonna be a child the whole time? that completely cuts off any chance of romance without making it weird abit disappointing
Including Ah Yin in the story had to be the worst possible choice the constant back-seat mortality and naive mentality for what? why does he even bother listening to her? like she can't do shit and generally worthless character