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thanks for the chapter! I'm loving the story, and love how the skellies are getting Roles. it's adding a lot of dimension for them to grow as characters, and we can bond more with the level 3 skellies more. quick note: in the very first paragraph, it says "treant" when it should say "dihexapede" (please forgive any spelling errors)
I like the explicit, dark tones. the emotional pain that comes from empathizing with these suffering characters gives more depth to the story. it also gives more hate towards your villains. it's up to you on how graphic you illustrate the scenes, but I think they should be kept. also, the more graphic, the more pain/hate the scenes generate
READ THIS BOOK! This is definitely my favorite novel on this app, and it's the first one to actually make me spend money on coins so that I could keep reading. The premise is intriguing, the world building is in-depth but not overbearing, and the attitude and personality of the protagonist is my favorite blend. Overall, this is an awesome read