Neokaiser

just saying... it's just that there's a lot of people who deserve second chances but was never given the opportunity I just can't symphatize with the MC. but your work is good no doubt about it.

Well this is disturbing. he killed his own father who never wronged him. he doesn't deserve redemption. in life, there's no second chances. those who believe in second chances are either destined for mediocrity or simply delusional.

The author is really destroying his novel same with EGM with an illogical plot hole and plot armor he destroyed it. The title should be changed to dumb and dumber. two idiot siblings against the world. Why don't you make him absorb his sisters menstruation too if you're not satisfied enough then let him go to a blood bank then make him the history's 1st blood heist. Retard.

this is dumb. the MC became a dumb simp. his blood power has been nerfed big time which is very much the author tends to do like in his EGM where he made an illogical plot hole everywhere. stupid. come on man! he fight on equal footing with those spacewarriors which is much much stronger than this orc champion mob. you made the MC STUPID. tch such a letdown.

THERE IT IS!!! the legendary 'FATTY' sidekick of the MC! hahaha

so where are his attributes? Hays

Naivety and idiocy is different. the MC is an idiot no a retard. for his age and what he experienced by far he should at least be aware of human nature. not to mention the author introduce him more matured than his age. I don't like the MC so far but I'll continue reading.

What a bad chapter. it's redundant to say the least. this reminds me that having an eidetic memory and being smart are two different things. the mc's a letdown so far and his personality is rapidly going down the wrong path and too fast at that.

OK so this is an Indian made novel. I hope it doesn't turn out like a Chinese one. I dislike Chinese supremacist novels so I hope it doesn't turned to be one.

it's boring. there's not a lot of MC exposure yet but the story is already switching pov to supporting characters. at least try to build up the MC first before switching pov. this is a legend of legends copy cat alright. I can tell the MC is gonna be a fascist hero type shouldering the fate of the universe. hays