SaishoMysteriarch
I like reading and have been doing it for a long time, I also enjoy doing a bit of writing mostly fictional and just to help pass the time.
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SaishoMysteriarch5minCommentedI always thought of that as the best way to counter him other than just cutting off his hands.
He'd been wrapped tightly in a void black energy of some sort, his body was completely bound aside from his head, and both his hand were being held directly against the sides of his head.- SaishoMysteriarch2dCommented
he is soo regretting that latter.
"I had a lot of time to learn. Flaxan stole a lot of knowledge from other dimensions and kidnapped many scientists from other worlds. I simply took advantage of my time there to acquire a few skills from them. Maybe I could share some of that with you, and you could teach me more about Earth's technology" he said amiably. - SaishoMysteriarch4dCommented
so is he aware of what was supposed to be?
This was one-way Oogway could repent for his mistake. Kai was not as strong as canon since he did not get Tai Lung's Chi so he would be able to hold him off for a little longer. - SaishoMysteriarch6dReplied to Big_cheif
just look up the name of the novel should come up on the first page.
Three realms of the Martial Path: Body Fortification, Post-Heaven, and Pre-Heaven. - SaishoMysteriarch14dCommented
bruh... I cam here to compare the mtl and this and the mtl is already better
Three realms of the Martial Path: Body Fortification, Post-Heaven, and Pre-Heaven. - SaishoMysteriarch15dReplied to Dextroller3x
while that expansion is acceptable. that isn't what is written.... and yes typo and all that but come on that had to be intentional.
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some paragraphs are repeated.
"Ice Emperor, are you sure this hole goes straight down?" Shui Wuya confirmed again. - SaishoMysteriarch20dCommented
this one is a lot more useful in the dungeon.
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this sentence could use some tweaking, adding something like "it's like" or "not because" would have made it easier to understand on it's own without the need for the second sentence. otherwise it just reads "he didn't achieve it because he was lazy" in meaning.
Today was the seventh day of his training, and he was just one step away from completing the bone marrow refinement. And he didn't achieve it because he was lazy, but his sword training and wind art demanded a time that he had to share. - SaishoMysteriarch23dCommented
people complain about that? the only reason I have to dislike it is that it means I get less chapters of a good story when I find one.
That's it for the introductory chapter. I will be adding 14k words for early rankings entry and will delete any reviews which complain about it- it's not an unfair advantage, it's a loophole, one I intend to use one hundred per cent. - SaishoMysteriarch24dCommentedCh 10 Session 9
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forth wall break
[*ERROR ... ERROR*] - SaishoMysteriarch30dCommented
bro doesn't learn.
Peter narrowed his eyes, his hand still throbbing even though it was healed again. "Yeah? So what now?" he demanded, his voice tinged with defiance. "You gonna throw me into another trial? Is this supposed to be some sick form of entertainment for you?" - SaishoMysteriarch1mthCommented
well he isn't the only one with an uncomfortable feeling on his chest.
I got comfortable in my seat again, leaning against the inner wall of the carriage. I closed my eyes and meditated to get the wrong feeling off my chest. - SaishoMysteriarch1mthCommented
bro this was handled perfectly great job dude, this is definitely going into the library now.
It was a shame that he had been unable to kill Mahito in the process. - SaishoMysteriarch1mthCommented
bro thinks he's in dragonball 😂
'You don't hit someone throwing up!!!' - SaishoMysteriarch1mthCommented
I know that they are at the start of their journey and all but the 4 founders came out to be a bit too dumb here. I can see that Rowan was driven by her curiosity, slytherin wanted power, the other idiot was taunted into it and hufflepuff just kida followed along. but just walking into the library like they owned the place and attacking the guards no less even if they did get inside they would have been executed or imprisoned later on. I get them being arrogant, but I would atleast expect them to try and be sneaky about it. what they did wasn't arrogant it was just dumb.
Not gonna lie, I liked writing this chapter. Total domination as it should be. Tell me how you liked it. There is something else that happened in 1913, concerning one of the Scamander brothers, but that is minor and will be explained next chapter. - SaishoMysteriarch1mthCommented
I'm guessing you mean "the tables turned"
After it seemed like the war would take many years, the turns ... tabled.