Think you meant Ervin

So why didn’ they use a phones tear on his father it makes no sense that they didn’t. The phoniex family has full rights to distribute as they see fit without even the Satans or the great king faction having a say in the matter. Also the grimmory house hold would most likely have quite a few in reserve due their status. They are known to bring people who were on the verge of death back to life

Do you mean trash not thrash

Thanks for the chapter think this is an later chapter Not the correct chapter

Think you want to change the ‘of’ to by or 70% to 30% as currently your only reducing by 30%

That works much better than before

That may be the case however by stating that fact Its join or die or be bLackmailed into joining no one will be happy with that. given a Opportunity theY would betray or leave with no qualms. i think those parts should either not be said or katherines thoughts instead

ThanKs for the chapter why did his sense go down on the secodn status screen

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I would personAlly choose magic swordsman while golden ratio is really strong it doesn’t Snt provide as much versatility as magic swordsman and it doeant have the inherent weakness of Golden ratio as it doesn’t state if the ratio is Just with base stats or equipemEnt as well or if buffs and debuffs effect it.

Thanks for the chapter most of the tests were find to basically skip but I feel the warfare one should havebeen expanded a bit more on

I ended up commenting twice as The paragraph comment wasnt showing up sorry aNd yes It has

Thanks for the chapter want to check your maths on damage as for the boss to heal roughly 10% from 54 members needs to drain 185-186 per member

Think your missing a 0 herefor the amount taken as maThs doesnt add up with just 15

Alright novel however the multiple repeats bring it down at least 3 repeats that exact same as previous chapters wish web novel would fix this as this, seemsro happening a lot with recent novels

He was young when his father died the council haven't got a clue who is the guardian is is he is still alive or protecting them so won't give him false hope his mother doesn't want history to repeat if s else and promised not to tell him and from what we have been told he's a muscle brain idiot so it not surprising why he hasn't been told or can work it out

So oUr MC travelled back in time With the queen of thorns

This is a duplicate cHapter of previous chapter

Hope so hes a really unlikable character selfish, cruel warped. i hope he either dies or has some major set Backs or it doent go his way

Thanks for the Chapter may want to go back over a proof read as theres a lot of spelling mistakes