MitchJH

Even if the rest of the story is mainly hip being a shop keep forever, I love it and the character growth. This is a fantastic set of chapters

There’s three duplicate paragraphs in the middle of the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Bit of an odd perspective jump from last chapter

It appears to be written with an AI app so that’ pry whys

Chat gpt*

Chat got promp half way through the chapter. Might want to fix lol

Still appears to repeat. Will check again later ,aybe it takes a bit

Half this chapter is legit word for word a copy paste, exact same content posted twice

Two paragraphs are just repeated here, moves the story forward but not in an appreciable way. 4/10 not worth privileged status