Nathan_Gardner
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Nathan_Gardner1yrCommentedthe meteorite was on paradise island not pine city.
The first-generation meteorite should still be there!- Nathan_Gardner1yrCommented
annnnnnnd... you lost me. too many numerical inconsistencies
The tester knew Lu Yu. He remembered that during the test last year, he was only slightly over 1000 kilograms and barely managed to maintain his status of a Grade 1 Martial Arts Warrior. - Nathan_Gardner1yrCommented
i thought he didnt have the devour sequence yet? how is he doing this?
As long as it was edible, the whole cave was eaten up by Ye Feng. - Nathan_Gardner1yrCommented
dude, some consistency in your names of thing a would lead to alot less confusion... like you literally just called these skills something else in the last paragraph.
[Water Bomb: After a short period of gathering the elements, it will form a water bomb in the air. If it hits the enemy, it will produce a repelling effect.] - Nathan_Gardner2yrCommented
noticed a few times you wrote "stated" instead of "started".
The day's travel had gone pretty uneventfully with the party begin attacked only once by a pack of wolfs that they were easily able to take care of. Setting up camp again for the night next to a small pond the merchants and adventures started to cook up a feast from the bear meat Marcus was carrying in his item box. One of the merchants who was well versed in cooking, took out the largest pot the group had and stated making a stew. He of course used the bear meat as the main ingredient followed by plethora of vegetables. He added wild mushrooms found nearby in the forest, carrots and potatoes, and many other vegetables Marcus had never seen. They even added a number of spices to the stew enhancing its flavor to another level. - Nathan_Gardner2yrCommented
what about him leveling up but not showing his current level?
Also, if you find loop holes, feel free to tell me as well. Thank you for reading and may all of you have a blessed day. - Nathan_Gardner2yrCommented
i thought it disappeared?
Learning that Rebecca had a high magic aptitude, Dave decided to give her a Skill Book of Small Fireball, so she would study a spell until she increased her spirit; doing homework before being able to learn the skill. - Nathan_Gardner2yrCommented
that must've been messy
Before long, more bodies filled the skies between them. Kace rapidly depleted the remaining charges in the pistols. Firing shits off in all directions, each one reaping the life of a hero.