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Concealed25

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  • Concealed25
    Concealed252mth
    Commented

    in your dreamsss

    In real life, it might be similar to a situation where a husband has been away on a long "business trip" without returning home, but the wife still sets the table, lays out the cutlery, and prepares meals for two every day, hoping that one day, the husband will remember this home and come back, and she can greet him with a smile and say, "Welcome Back Dear"
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    Fallen Chronicles
    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Replied to Kin_Pin_1631

    At some points, the 'Lost Generation' would be mentioned, which categorized highly evolved humans. The limiter as its name suggest, limits their body to function at its full capacity so they can live as normal people.

    Fjora appeared a second later without her armor. Kzel was flabbergasted to a new discovery. Her chest bulged under her grey suit. The very curves from her upper body to her long and attractive legs vividly gave him a glimpse of desire. Although his limiter was 'on' back in reality, he can feel the regular emotions of a normal human being but still have his restraints.
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    Exodus: Infinity 》Connected《
    Sci-fi · Concealed25
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Replied to R4GE

    wait! faster? not slower? even if you played 12 years straight, you'd only experience 2 months in the game.

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    MMORPG: Rebirth of the Shadow Mage
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    This, however, I would disagree the most. Darkness is the oldest of all. No one is yet to be able to portray it in its purest form nor understand it. ✌️

    "That would be Holy and Chaos Magic. There are also other Magic Affinities such as Lightning, Space, and Gravity. However, not all Magic Affinities have a superior version."
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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Replied to SiNgLeSiNcEbIrTh33

    Logically, no. It doesn't have density enough to cause such a thing. Probably, when you add water and pressurised air. The water will do the cutting while air is the force.

    "Yes, that's correct. Each Magic Affinity has their own strengths and weaknesses. For example, Dark Magic specializes in destruction but requires more mana than usual while Wind Magic specializes in support and speed but lacks firepower."
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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    black flame 🤣

    "You were dreaming about using magic, right? You were shouting 'Black Bullet!' and 'Black Flame!' out loud throughout the whole night." Lilith chuckled at him.
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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    Black Flame. Lol. If one actually understands darkness, it will never bond with fire. 🤣

    "This is the magic circle for Black Flame, a dark and fire magic spell." Lilith explained.
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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Posted

    Since I came this far, let me.... I, C25, the bringer of chaos in multiple universes, is here to spur chaos. Destroyer of innocence... ahem ahem* My very first review since I'm being snubbed. ----- This work is solely created to give new perspectives and new ideas. Let the resilient have a glimpse of another world.

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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Replied to RisingChaos

    That depends. Some can be easily discarded by the body and some that are deeply learned stays permanent. When you're right-handed and just because you have amnesia for months, you become left-handed because you're confuse which is your dominant hand. Although, yes, general discussion says muscle memory last for months, but some says it takes years or even permanent. It depends, really. Sometimes, a change of routine can make your nervous system forget. But I'd bet my money on an elite warrior who had months of amnesia than an old veteran who hadn't fought for decades.

    "I heard that he's suffering from amnesia, though, so he might not even remember how to fight."
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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    Wake me up again.

    Ch 1 { CHAPTER - 1 } THE START OF NIGHTMARES
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    Overall, it got readable. Keep it up! 👍🏻

    Ch 1 { CHAPTER - 1 } THE START OF NIGHTMARES
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    You could just put; To his surprise, he saw a monster on the mirror and jumped back.

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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    All the present tense and past tense jumbled up. For example is this one.

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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    Bruh! Wake me up again.

    waking up feeling uneasy, he said to himself in a tired voice.
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    Their eyes crossed each other, and the shadowy figure as if in rage, attacked him with the intention to devour him whole.

    the two of them crossed their eye's with each other, and the shadow figure as in rage, attack him as to eat him whole.
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    , a shadowy figure appeared and ate the whole sky.

    Just when he thought he was safe, a shadow figure appears and eat the whole sky.
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    He looked to his back to see if there's someone following him but saw none. Raising his head to the sky, he saw that the moon was blue and the sky was clear.

    He look's behind to see if there is anyone but see no one, then he look's up at the sky. the moon is blue and the sky is clear.
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    A person/figure ran for his life. He wanted to scream but couldn't as he is overwhelmed by feat while trying to escape from the 'unknown'. He saw the area in his front clearing up so he stopped to catch his breath.

    Someone run's for their life, someone who wants to scream but can't, someone who is overwhelmed by fear while running away from the 'unknown'. He saw the area in front getting opened up and stops at certain point to catch his breath.
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    Since it's established as a 'he'. Let's try to get a better view

    Someone run's for their life, someone who wants to scream but can't, someone who is overwhelmed by fear while running away from the 'unknown'. He saw the area in front getting opened up and stops at certain point to catch his breath.
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    GOOD SIN: THE LEGEND OF AN ASURA
    Fantasy · KARMA_7
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  • Concealed25
    Concealed251yr
    Commented

    massage again? I saw this somewhere 🤔

    "After all, your mastery of the Heavenly Massage has even surpassed I, your teacher, who has been practicing it for decades. Does that even make sense?"
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    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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