Ayries_Jesea
Hi I am Ayries.I like novels about reincarnating, I'm more into fanfics now those self inserts.I like MC that are op but they didn't receive everything in just one Chapter.
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Ayries_Jesea12hCommentedThe story is interesting but it is bit too fast face that it had no emotional impact like this chapter. As for this one, it is a good time for making the expeirienc some setback and challenges I just hope you will at least put more details in the context and not just skip again. Like the adventure with the scarlet witch, it didn't give much engagement and just feels more paragraph. I think you focused too much on the options and items instead of the story. I just advise you to slow down, add more context and just jump to another scene.
Author's Note: So yeah, Oliver versus Mjolnir. Of course, it wasn't the normal hammer; this was Mjolnir twisted and combined with something else, by someone angry at the Asgardians. Anyways, place your bets: will Oliver get his ass handed to him, left crippled with a broken spine, paralyzed and left for dead in the Dark Dimension where he has to fight with all he has, or will he chip and shatter the metal?- Ayries_Jesea14dCommented
I find his prodigy skill learning speed a bit slow. I know he is already faster learner than the rest but I think it's still slow, plus the skill tree function is kinda useless actually aside from giving him a list of skill names, which he will still need to figure out how to get, its the same way people get skill in tensura they just dont get a notification It would have been more useful if there is instructions but the requirements are hard to do for stronger skills. Like the merciless where the mc need to massacre thousands of lives to get
Ch 15 Getting Humbled by a Bug - Ayries_Jesea15dReplied to Joanjudo
Good luck with your fanfic
"Meeting Geralt and Ciri is quite unexpected..., but anyway, there's no reason we have this interaction now." Madara murmured and continued jumping with his feet wrapped in chakra, and he didn't even imagine how he had left an impact on the Witcher and princess duo as he jumped through the air in the forest. - Ayries_Jesea16dReplied to Joanjudo
Well there are actually but I forgot most, but the simplest is too participate in the slme gods trial for a reward of increase in ring age, in douluo dalu 3, they invented some kind of vr of where if they kill the spirit beast there they are able to gather energy to increase the rings age. Overall I think you just need a proper energy to add to the spirit ring to increase the age
"Meeting Geralt and Ciri is quite unexpected..., but anyway, there's no reason we have this interaction now." Madara murmured and continued jumping with his feet wrapped in chakra, and he didn't even imagine how he had left an impact on the Witcher and princess duo as he jumped through the air in the forest. - Ayries_Jesea18dCommented
They meet a bit too soon, that it feels dull
"Meeting Geralt and Ciri is quite unexpected..., but anyway, there's no reason we have this interaction now." Madara murmured and continued jumping with his feet wrapped in chakra, and he didn't even imagine how he had left an impact on the Witcher and princess duo as he jumped through the air in the forest. - Ayries_Jesea18dCommented
A bit too much, and detailed. Try to lessen it, it will be less cringe.
"But didn't the prophecy speak of a man with many types of eyes, black, red, and purple, that he would summon something that would make the entire continent tremble and no force in this world could fight him, even the gods feared him!!! Do you think it's real? Will I meet him?" The girl spoke with a mix of excitement and fear. - Ayries_Jesea19dCommented
Thats what you get for asking an apocalypse world.
'Is this all I can do even after reincarnating and getting those wishes'. Alex had his hands clenched while looking at the massacre happening in front of him. - Ayries_Jesea22dReplied to Joanjudo
Honestly I don't know, I am too stressed just from college that I don't even wanna do anything and just laid down. Maybe in the future when I don't have anything else to do.
She charged straight at him again but this time at a much faster speed than before. She was upon him before he could get out of the way again, so he grit his teeth without showing it and lifted up his other forearm to block the punch. He'd jumped back onto the stone path, so as he absorbed the punch, his feet punched into the ground creating cracks in the stone bricks.detailChaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi - Ayries_Jesea26dReplied to HerRoyalReader
Because he has the ability and it is the perfect ability to defend and attack at the same time, and him getting smashed around and damage when he could use the abilty to deflect back the damage is just pure annoying
She charged straight at him again but this time at a much faster speed than before. She was upon him before he could get out of the way again, so he grit his teeth without showing it and lifted up his other forearm to block the punch. He'd jumped back onto the stone path, so as he absorbed the punch, his feet punched into the ground creating cracks in the stone bricks.detailChaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
Aren't the animals a bit too powerful, and also where I hear it but animal gaining quirks is rare right?
The deer turned and left my body there since it didn't eat meat (Like your mother!), I turned to dust and reformed 50 seconds later. - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
Meh, this lind of ability always gets me off. I mean I'm fine with mcs helping his companions grow but more on individualistic form, just giving a copy lf their their ability kinda make them somehow less unique
Sharing is Caring: You might come across someone who could really benefit from a lot more than a hug or platonic snuggling. You're able to loan out any perks, powers, or skills you possess to anyone you cuddle and call them back at any time. If you are further intimate with them, you'll be able to give out copies of your abilities instead. (Free) - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to BeixuanLovell
Ah magic, magic items and probably more
'Sacred Gear... Is that how they refer to the system?' Shinka kept his expression neutral, showing no hint of doubt or confusion. - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
Ok this has just goes beyond a point.
'This system can be inherited or shared in some way, and if that's the case, then maybe angels share their systems with exorcists.' - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
I can see the very logic behind the mc thoughts, but I dislikes that he ignores the possibility of other supernatural race cause there is already hints there the mana, magic, and the word species im the status page
Shinka refused to believe that it was pure chance that so many people with a system were gathered in the same room. - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to Doggos4Life
Because thinking that you are the only one in possesions is just being stupid and not considering the possibilities that others might have and they might be a threat
In either case, Shinka hoped it was the first option, and that Grandma really had a system for years, given that maybe that could explain why he and his sister have one. - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to blazuki
Mom and Dad's spirit came to help.
'Now that I think about it, in Naruto, everyone is a mage playing ninja except for Lee and Guy.' I opened my eyes widely, seeming to realize another shocking fact about Naruto. And the professor, AKA 3rd Hokage, is like Dumbledore. Orochimaru was like Voldemort. - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
Then naruto, sakura and sasuke the golden trio. Although sakura is not as useful as Hermione.
'Now that I think about it, in Naruto, everyone is a mage playing ninja except for Lee and Guy.' I opened my eyes widely, seeming to realize another shocking fact about Naruto. And the professor, AKA 3rd Hokage, is like Dumbledore. Orochimaru was like Voldemort.