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One of the best fanfics I have seen in a while. The setting is amazing ( the long dark being one of my favourite games) and very unique. The main character is also quite human, with just a bit of chinese creeping in. It is however very light when compared to the usual on this site. All around, a great story that hopefully keeps its quality further.

It is as much as one can expect from a douluo fic, but it is by far not the worst one I've read. The translation quality is very good as well, so it is a good fic to binge. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.

One of the best writing quality I have ever seen on this website. It has a very nice mashup of anime, with very good storytelling. The only thing that feels a bit too vague is his ability. It is, however, very early in the story, so I am not too sad about it. Since truly slow-paced stories are a rarity, I am quite excited about finding out what is going to happen in the future. If the story goes long enough, it might become one my ,,comfort food'' types of stories, which is always a welcome addition. Overall, as long as this won't get dropped, expect at least a power stone from me. Thank you for the great time so far and I am looking forward to the continuation of the story. P.S: I really hope the tragedies from the verses won't happen.

As it is with most Harry Potter stories, the world-building is very elaborate. However, along the way, it may suffer from following the main plot a bit too closely. As of now, however, the author was able to insert quite a bit of fresh content, which I am looking forward to more of in the future. I am a bit torn on the personality of the main character. He is, for the lack of a better word, unstable. I cannot quite yet grasp whether he is a power-seeking individual or just a neutral person. His actions are a bit flippant, which may be explained by his physical age. It remains to be seen whether he can outgrow his flaws and build up his character. Personally, however, I am not quite sure of the early inclusion of romance. It is not a bloodthirsty world, like the world of Naruto, for example, so early budding romance should not be so present. He is, however, already looking at 2-3 potential romance options, and that at the age of 11. I am not quite sure whether this inclusion so early was necessary. It may be due to the nature of this website, since novels without romance or late romance are quite quickly bashed and forgotten. I won't say it became a big problem so far. In general, I am looking forward to how the author will break the mold of the world, how the author will advance his created character, and how he is going to shape this already well-documented world. As of now, even if there are quite a few chapters, the plot is still a thing, and the main character has not done anything too noteworthy. I hope this will change in the future. Also, I like the way he interacts with his teachers. I would enjoy seeing such things more, especially since there are quite a few options for future teachers. I am especially interested in whether the author will include some other magic systems, like the African, Japanese, Chinese, or Asgardian magic. It would be funny to stop Voldemort using a Shinto charm or even purify him using Shikigami. Thank you for the novel; it is an enjoyable ride so far.

This fanfic has my favourite works in it, so I am looking forward to more updates. The one thing that sold it to me is the presence of a novel that I followed for a few years. The writing quality is top-notch as well, with amazing world building. Thanks for the chapters author :)

This story is quite interesting for now. Looking forward for new chapters :)

Great chaper! And is it going on the Hephaistos road ? :P Cus she is my fav girl in all Danmachi :D

Thanks for the chapter. This already looks promising. Hope to see new chapters soon :)

So far it is pretty interesting. Keep it up ✌

Thanks for the chapter. So far looks pretty interesting. Keep it up :)