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The_Dumb_Dummy2 years agoReplied to GuiltyOfSlothYour Welcome (See what I did there?)
- The_Dumb_Dummy2 years agoPosted
Alright, review time. So far, as of the 21st Chapter, I have figured out a few things about this story. Those being that this story is bascially going on the concept of 'Divergence' as in everything will be in chaos after some time.I am not sure if I am explaining it right but this is probably the best fic I have ever read as far as representation of 'Causiality and Butterfly effects' goes and unexpectedly or maybe that's the strong point of this story all the events makes sense. Like you can actually see what will happen because of the stuff the MC does.Also the writing style is really good and the name of the MC absolutely sucks 😩Finally, Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development - ⭐⭐⭐ (Three star because the development is kinda weird around the 19ish chapter, like MC does stuff that kinda doesn't make sense for him to do.)Character Design and everything else - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
- The_Dumb_Dummy2 years agoReplied to NC1
He lives,
- The_Dumb_Dummy2 years agoReplied to Dark_B
That IS an error and with that you have found the 4th error after the latest error! 6 more and a tear, and the next chapter shall flow.
This paragraph has been deleted. - The_Dumb_Dummy4 years agoReplied to I_Love_Hina
Hey can you tell me where did you get the sticker, cuz it's face resembles a character from 'returner's magic should be special' novel.
