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hello there author. I have to say, your work is pretty solid. I especially like, how you portrait you OC and how he is slowly rising to power, i really enjoy that he is not perfect and he makes mistakes like a human. Furthermore, his interactions with his master are sometimes funny, sometimes deep and we can clearly see building his character threw them. I hope you have a nice day and thank you for making such a nice read(your imagination is wild đ)!
Do you know the word selfless?. Its not strange for strong people to go and help the weak ones, in fact people that usually have some kind of power ( strength, money etc) they usually feel like they have the responsibility to do something. Yes, there is the case of getting power to complete personal tasks and do whatever the fuck i want, but you cant forget the other side of the coin, which is being selfless and try to help people the best i can with my abilities
i dont understand why you are mad.... its fanfic, if you dont like it delete it from your library.
readers complaining about different things not happening . how they read :
keep the good work up my friend !. I like your novel and most of all ,i like the research you are doing for your story. Keep it up and have a nice day ^^
wellll close to none character development ,kinda disappointed but it is wwhat it is .Also , the reason i hate harems is because there is no romance and character development , kinda like what you did in the chapter . I mean in yhe previous chapter , we met kuroka and in the next one we go straight to morning sex. whats the point of romance if the girls have no personality to back it up?. Anyways , have a good day ^^
Dont forget about leg day !!!.2 times, a week .
Apeiro means infinity , in Greece we say it like this , ÎÏΔÎčÏÎż.
thank you for writing your fan fic with your mind, and not with your d*ck!.Anyways , keep it up .!!!!^^
you are right my friend
yes but the courses were way easier then. I mean tobirama doesnt want children that they can boast about their achievements . What he needs are soldiers that are gonna listen to his command so konoha can be victorious on the next war !
second war was close , and tobirama needed soldiers not kids ...kinda sad
it does , scholars usually teach it
his not her * still keep up the work mate ^^
pretty nice story till this point ! Will mc have any romantic interest .? I am asking coz you wrote something about his former lover stabbing him in the lung's,and im interested to see if he is gonna let someone in his life again . Also, its kinda nice the way he is trying to be an uncle to Naruto and kinda fails in it :P. hope tou have a nice day and cant wait for more ^^
and people dont shot nen and chi left and right ,but here we are .
till this point you doing fine ! i really enjoy it hiw mc thinks with his head and grids his skills , and for the love of god dagger master is how its supposed to be ! Learn how tthe ffk to use it and not only deal more dmg