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hello there author. I have to say, your work is pretty solid. I especially like, how you portrait you OC and how he is slowly rising to power, i really enjoy that he is not perfect and he makes mistakes like a human. Furthermore, his interactions with his master are sometimes funny, sometimes deep and we can clearly see building his character threw them. I hope you have a nice day and thank you for making such a nice read(your imagination is wild 😜)!
Do you know the word selfless?. Its not strange for strong people to go and help the weak ones, in fact people that usually have some kind of power ( strength, money etc) they usually feel like they have the responsibility to do something. Yes, there is the case of getting power to complete personal tasks and do whatever the fuck i want, but you cant forget the other side of the coin, which is being selfless and try to help people the best i can with my abilities
i dont understand why you are mad.... its fanfic, if you dont like it delete it from your library.
readers complaining about different things not happening . how they read :
keep the good work up my friend !. I like your novel and most of all ,i like the research you are doing for your story. Keep it up and have a nice day ^^
wellll close to none character development ,kinda disappointed but it is wwhat it is .Also , the reason i hate harems is because there is no romance and character development , kinda like what you did in the chapter . I mean in yhe previous chapter , we met kuroka and in the next one we go straight to morning sex. whats the point of romance if the girls have no personality to back it up?. Anyways , have a good day ^^
Dont forget about leg day !!!.2 times, a week .
Apeiro means infinity , in Greece we say it like this , Άπειρο.
thank you for writing your fan fic with your mind, and not with your d*ck!.Anyways , keep it up .!!!!^^
you are right my friend
yes but the courses were way easier then. I mean tobirama doesnt want children that they can boast about their achievements . What he needs are soldiers that are gonna listen to his command so konoha can be victorious on the next war !
second war was close , and tobirama needed soldiers not kids ...kinda sad
it does , scholars usually teach it
his not her * still keep up the work mate ^^
pretty nice story till this point ! Will mc have any romantic interest .? I am asking coz you wrote something about his former lover stabbing him in the lung's,and im interested to see if he is gonna let someone in his life again . Also, its kinda nice the way he is trying to be an uncle to Naruto and kinda fails in it :P. hope tou have a nice day and cant wait for more ^^
and people dont shot nen and chi left and right ,but here we are .