where are you? where did you go? don't tell me this is dropped

sir author, I am getting hook on your writing, although it's confusing now, I hope in 10 chapter I would able to understand the world you are creating.

I think you make mistake here

what aether, are we in jams or aether. this is confusing

what when did heroine become him.

how aether? shouldn't it be jam

hello sir, I hope you to continue this work, it's my guilty pleasure to read fanfic. and so onward I would like to read it

this make no sense, how come lumine got caught. rather it should lumine is the one who caught me(paimon) from lake. don't take this as personal, just let you know

tugged on lumine, and said Rosalyn make no sense. hope to correct this para

sir, author. thank once again. it was great chapter

change it, you will only confused it again with archon.

author nim, I enjoy your work and glad to be read it.. high rating is due to its being an already develop. so forgive me, but the writing quality is good, although I am not a English specialist, but writing quality is quite easy to read. your update stability is quite strong indeed. there are certain para which confused the heck out of me.. thank you of writing but sometime, I feel like committing some crime

I mean, you wrote sucrose, even though she didn't appear. in this para, shouldnt it be someone present there

quite a irony, freya goddess of love and hunt, in methodology has many affair

I'm confused, sucrose didn't appear. how come. I'm confused

author nim, hope you continue your work. I love your work. rating are low due to low chapter, hope you can continue

45 degree is some kind of punchline. although it is interesting, but

Elizabeth we need her. if there is meliodas, there is need for her

no in the hell am i gonna read everything. there is no paragraph to rest and process. i read and wanna check forget where am i 121332323232323232