this story/novel is interesting and has a lot of potential..I myself am facinated with the idea of modern weapons vs cultivation bullshit but the reason why writing quality is 2 star is because of so many grammatical errors(which can improve)I can understand that maybe this is your first book and English is not your second language but the amount of grammatical errors here are so many...Overall it's a great read you just gotta improve your grammar...

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A Really Great Book And Story,And It Looks Like Research Was Made Unlike Other Kingdom Building Books,I'm Excited About What Would Happen In The Future Overall It's A Great Read Keep Up The Good Work..

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