Hey Rara, I am done editing chapters, you can read now. I will be done with all the chapters by tomorrow. Thank you for waiting patiently

Thank you for your feedback. Actually, there was a time when the few initial chapters were in first person but had to edit it to third. Also, I am working on correcting all those mistakes. I am currently done with editing 5 chapters and will be editing others soon.

Thank you for letting me know🙇‍♀️

Of course! I update two chapters everyday. Thank you for your review .

sure

Thank you very much

I think writing needs a little improvement. However, the storyline is good and the character design is perfect. I suggest you try showing instead of just simply telling the story.

Thank you!

I like this book. The prologue was giving good vibes. Unique. Even though the book has only a few chapters. It seems like this is going to be good.

I like this! !

woah! !

Thank you

Thank you for describing it so well! !

Thank you! !

This is so good! A gem! This is a book one should not miss. I loved how it started. First chapter and I am already drawn in. Good going dear author! !

I like how it has started .

This is a gem! ! It's so good. One chapter and I'm already in. But why is the chapter so long! !🥲. Just not used to long chapters😁. Overall, I love everything about this story. Good going Author! !

Honestly , It is good. I was drawn to the story by merely reading only one chapter. Just beautiful. The writing style is good and the vocabulary is good. The character design is amazing. Overall, yeah it's good and the story has potential. Totally worth reading.

The chapter was pretty. keep writing! !

I like how the story is going honestly! Also the pov is giving a very good vibe to the story. Both the lead characters are very well structured. Overall, I like it. ❤️