-

Man , please focus on the progress of the story. Its good to have side characters but don't focus on their inner monologue too much. Its starting to become fillers and most are skipped. I don't know where you are going with the story but some characters are important like his family members (you skipped his father by the way ) but others maybe you should have them one thought collectively and move on. The world building needs some details. I don't really understand the situation between races. Is it one empire and subordinate kingdoms or more like countries. What did they fight for.

Boring . Kill kill kill no wisdom no story nothing really just system overpowered megalomaniac killing machine that serves no purpose . This stories should really be banned . The good thing is that the translation is good but please stop wasting your time on this kind of stories . System stories are already overused and became boring. Anyway thanks for translation

To much inner dialogue stop that **** it's stupid really be clear about his Goals and take action the end ................................................

If you are going to stop the story give us a heads up don't make us hanging .................................................................