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yes plz that would help

dumb on so many levels why kill her

talk more about him and summons and less about everybody else and to many filler words

don't disappoint me author or I will give bad review for now I will give u a five star for now if it starts sucking u going down

I am so confused about what is going it is jumping between to many characters plz just tell me what's going on

so you wants this hands author well prepare for a good thrashing my good chap

Mc is to passive and to inpatient

just cut the racist stuff all together

oj didn't kill anybody it was the mob

Roy needs this being in his harem