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I think the author is over-hyping the story and the events. Plus, the use of Rough Trader seems like a hack job and a lack of real creativity.

Not bad 😁

The author couldn't. The thing is, the series has no heroes at all. The author introduces a psychopathic archetype, imbues a canonical character with new powers, and ruins everything. We're told the hero is incredibly patient and capable of long, well-thought-out pretense. We're told he's very (quite) smart and cunning. But the truth is, it's a lie. The author thinks a cold-blooded maniac is cool, but in reality, it's just stupid. The author has failed to provide narrative logic. The character thinks and acts as if they have meta-knowledge of the world and the plot, but they don't. The author thinks that reincarnation miraculously grants power over an infant's undeveloped brain and hormonal system. He even pretended to be a normal child, which is simply ridiculous. Finally, there's a moment where the character gets everything they want without any obstacles. Let them into a secret lab on their first day? Yes, of course. See some information right away, as if it were that simple? Yes. It's ridiculous and implausible. Furthermore, the author claims not to use AI in her writing, but an attentive reader will notice jumps in the narrative and unnatural moments. I'm disappointed. The author couldn't develop the idea, couldn't handle the original characters, and finally, couldn't cope without AI at the beginning of the plot, which is simply a shame.

I see AI work. 😞 work

This is one of those works where the author is incapable of completing anything. The character has a system, but this system doesn't advance the plot at all. A man in the body of a dinosaur, but this has no effect on the plot. Friendliness towards people could be based on upbringing, not reincarnation. In other words, the man, finding himself in the place of a monster, gave in to the animal, without suffering in any way from becoming an animal, or from social isolation, or anything else. The character doesn't reveal his existence in another body, nor any shadows of his past life, habits, or beliefs. The Lion King was much better, because there, human intelligence actually mattered, whereas here, the character's stupidity is protected by the system. The plot is a cheap Chinese ploy about reactions, masturbation to "streaming" and online culture, as if that really matters. The surrounding characters are simply background or a repetition of the plot. Ultimately, this is another "original" Chinese story without any coherent content. Frankly, I'm surprised this work is popular here.

Now the work is turning into garbage due to the author's laziness and the AI's inability to proofread the text. I feel like this work will soon get 1 star overall.

The author overuses AI and is inattentive, the plot and text suffer from inconsistency and strange jumps.

The author just couldn't resist pumping up the character even more just for the sake of it. I'm disappointed. And I support those who were unhappy with this chapter.

This story would be better if the characters had a purpose, character, and enough depth to flesh out the world around them. But it's just another mediocre fantasy about an overpowered character who acts impulsively and passively follows a familiar plot. The main problem with this work is the lack of depth. The central character is rather superficial. He's a person who doesn't care where he lives, like someone temporarily residing in a house who isn't worried about it burning down or being destroyed, or that his neighbors are crazy or criminals. There's also no wow factor. I don't believe that an ordinary person would be indifferent to SI situations: a new body, new abilities, a new world. I would try to fly into space, visit beautiful, hard-to-reach places in the country, play with my powers in the desert, and so on. But here... none of that even comes close. The character metaphysically shrugs and moves on with his life. What can I say: it's a shame that the authors are missing the essence of resettlement. The author also didn't bring anything new to the plot. If the story's hero had done something new, had influenced the plot, it would have been more than just parasitizing on an existing product.

Do you know how fast man can sweem? It kinda stupid, when I see this. And of course, he even don't think about navigation in sea before! No one man can sweem faster than boat.