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LoRain1yrCommentedright thing you did there))) it feel more satisfying the way you did it))))
Had to take a second crack at this chapter to get it right. The first try was too much focused on Juan basically being a superhero, but it didn't feel right. Juan's not ready to stand in front of a whole army and tell them to bring more men. Not yet. Better get to at least purple quality cyberware before that happens.- LoRain1yrCommentedCh 25 Encirclement and Targeted Attention
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Mifune stile would be just enough
'7 Swordsmen... All carrying 'special' swords, not exactly a low-key group. Next time we meet... All of them will die... No. I won't just kill them. I'll make sure to get strong enough to crush them.' - LoRain1yrPosted
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make it a threesome!
"Good morning... Momo-chan." - LoRain1yrCommented
he reminds me of the elcors from mass effect, they also had an added gravity, and were talking slowly, but i dont remember the specifics, for what exact reason
"Is the change in your personality due to your quirk? You are a lot more talkative. It is so good, I am not the only one talking anymore!" - LoRain1yrPosted
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maybe it Hagoromo's plot? the lightning looks a lot like Yin release, and with his control he could probably achieve such result(i mean the purification thing), so maybe he just chose some pure, shiny soul to add to the world so the kid could brighten things up around? that would be my opinion i will stick around from now, so far the fanfic is good))
Ch 1 The Boy Named Raiden - LoRain1yrReplied to Injustice
He probably did it this way because of more people behind Momo on the sidewalk
She slowly turned her head forwards, only to see a large 18-wheeler truck, barreling towards her, just meters away. The phone slipped through her fingers, everything was happening too fast, she still hadn't realized that she was about to die, and it was too late to react. A surge of adrenaline hit her in the face of death, but it didn't do anything but prolong her death as her feet were stuck to the ground in fear. Just when she thought she was dead for sure, a tall young man with sunglasses on casually walked in front of her, putting himself in front of the truck. - LoRain1yrCommented
i bet, batman has a lie detector for ghosts(like that recorder) on him, or something, maybe mc is wary of that
I couldn't help but blow some air out lips as I grunted before speaking with a shrug. "Honestly I am still growing in strength but in the meantime, I have the Superman package with flight, durability strength and energy blasts in my repertoire along with some more racial abilities that coincide with my race of spirits that consist of a speed boost technique. A sensory technique. And lastly a technique that can further increase my durability." - LoRain1yrCommentedCh 17 Chapter 17(The First Solo Expedition Pt.6)
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Ren and Nora Mha edition
When she came back to the apartment, Rin expected her kinda-sorta-but-not-boyfriend to be bored, be drawing or on his phone. - LoRain1yrCommentedCh 56 Making plans
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what about, that you mentioned in his last fight with yetis, that he can go into sage mode in seconds??????
Fuyōna closed his eyes and kept his defenses up just encase of an attack, as he concentrated on absorbing natural energy. - LoRain1yrCommented
what did he do to pass?!?!? he only used one jutsu, and not the strongest one at that (i'm talking about that two kekkai fusion resulting technique) went out of his breath right away and then gone straight to tailed-beast mode
"The battle is over. You passed the test." He said. - LoRain1yrReplied to WebReaderPub
that's more like a garilla, here these have horns, but for myself i image them as the ones from the mummy third movie
He turned to look across the ice weighing up the distance with just a glance. Fuyōna took his first step onto the frozen lake, testing the ice's strength to see if it would hold his weight. - LoRain1yrCommented
a hand is missing, no?
The Kazekage slapped his hands together and made a few hand signs before finally placing his hands onto the sand. - LoRain1yrCommented
and it's always mcs ally's that are a complete garbage only good to die as usless as they have been through the story
They hit their mark, and Sawano was blasted back hitting the ground hard, his flak jacket being torn to shreds. He hit the ground hard looking at his body to try and assess the damage.