Translation can be improved at all. It could much better if it is improved.
continuation of story is bad. there are chapters which no sense in terms of continuation
I have read entire Light novel, which this Manhwa is based on. I was extremely delighted to find Manhwa version of it.
I highly recommend this comic. It is funny, action packed, has MC with Common sense.
Overpowered, Gluttony, useless MC - check.
Good story progression - check.
Humourous - check.
Non-redundant- check.
Romance - check ( visible mostly near the end)