LotusPetals
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2019-04-04 JoinedThailand
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LotusPetals6mthCommentedHer attack hit home, but the other monster from behind lunged forward, tearing into her back with brutal ferocity. I could see her flesh and even parts of her bones as her agonized screams filled the air.- LotusPetals6mthReplied to Aramani_CapalotCh 90 Battle of Words & Wit
- LotusPetals7mthCommentedCh 83 Nice to Meet You
- LotusPetals7mthCommentedCh 36 BATTLE ROYALE
- LotusPetals11mthPosted
Although the updating inconsistency is a flaw of the novel, other than that, it has been a great story so far. Interesting characters, interesting interactions but most of all, the self-awareness of the author criticizing himself and other writers for being inconsistent and falling into tropes and cliches when they have nothing else to write.
- LotusPetals1yrCommentedUsing both forefingers, she pointed at herself. "Me," she said. "I like you, Ike. I like you a lot. No... I love you a lot," she corrected herself. "So, I'm going to make you fall madly in love with me now. I'll give you no choice but to ask me out!"
- LotusPetals1yrCommentedCh 1 Speak Into Existence
- LotusPetals2yrCommentedCh 2 Kouhai's Ranting