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The writing mode is interesting I have already read another icaro fanfic in fate luckily and great work by the writer-san they don't look alike I am intrigued by the magic that the protagonist can develop considering the legend of icaro and the lore of fate I am excited hehe

for the ben 10 fanfic more than an mc who reincarnates in ben 10 or kevin, which is very worn, zero that it would be much better to create a story more around the lore for example: the knights. the whole magical side of the universe THE SAME MADAFAKA UNIVERSE hehehee well that's why I'm hooked on this fic 👌👌

Mmmmm quiero poner una groseria pero seré educado y pediré por favor otro capitulo

the mc is entertaining to read and the characters have personality mc's "hack" is useful and is not op, at least for now, the writing quality is of good quality even translating it with google-cha horario de actualizaciones razonable 😘😘

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I think that considering that Orochimaru is his sensei and that he has a great talent for medical ninjutsu, Yomi's dark medical ninjutsu techniques from the country of demons would be useful to him.

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That is because at least as far as I was able to interpret in Naruto, the shinobi clans were clans because you had a characteristic technique or element. The only clan in which this is not seen is in the Sarutobi clan. Anyway, the story is still interesting. ps: until now and considering the talent of the protagonist, I think he should dabble in illusions

caught my attention until now the protagonist is not a son of heaven or anything like that, he has things in which he stands out and others in which he does not, which I see as logical and makes me curious as to how the story will develop I also want to see what is special about your clan and what it can offer you in addition to its elemental affinities. there are a lot of them that are never used

I doubt he is superman but someone who does match his aesthetic is h'el the last son of krypton is spectacular PS: the story is very entertaining and has a lot of development potential I love it 💖

Ki is a natural energy emitted by people and objects when they move. It is separated from the mana already exists in black club but the full potential is not developed in the series

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Personally, I think the best FF are the ones in which the author explores and expands the world as he pleases following the original lore, so if I think the black dragon would be better in the middle and not as the final boss, it will allow spectacular expansions.

I already imagine silver with a black and red knight armor that makes him hephaestus with the corpse of Antares when at some point I defeat him I don't know if it will happen but it would be great and it would be something like his ultimate armor

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don't know English, it's all the fault of the translator xd ps: this is a restructuring right? because I made comments about giving stiles powers or that in the end mc doesn't have a significant relationship with Malia and I didn't read that anywhere and wtf

I like how the story is developed, the author gives it a touch and even though not everyone likes it, it is entertaining to read I hope this teen wolf ff continues and doesn't end up halfway like others the quality of writing is not bad but it is not great either, although that is explained by the fact that English is not her first language and the lack of experience, both are fixed and/or improve with time or practice

I love it the character development and story progression is great the world is well thought out and the power system is concise and realistic 10 out of 10 Liiza team forever ♡♡♡