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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez4d
    Replied to James_Horn

    it's always vampires why can't y'all wish to be viltrumite, werewolves, elves, dwarfs, or literally anything else

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    being an original in Westeros
    Movies · Kingoffrogs
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez4d
    Commented

    I Just hate when people go to the DC universe and the first thing they do is give away all their secrets and stuff it's disappointing become your own hero you got magic make your own base and mess with the justice league

    Ch 5 Chapter 5. The Questioning
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    Prime: Mystic Arts in DC
    Movies · SorcererPrime
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez17d
    Replied to jesus_hernandez

    look his powers are great however giving so many perspectives confuses the people and takes away from the main character also shield essentially killed his family him helping them is just depressing he could have become an antihero and opened up different paths for scenarios with other marvel characters also no random dude gets powers and just leaves it people want to see him build his powers and use them in creative ways to get ahead not be a lackey

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    Accidentally Ate The Goro Goro No Mi Fruit In Marvel!
    Movies · Karate_master_b
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez28d
    Posted

    the concept is intriguing but the character is written in a very dissatisfying way and is just essentially a prop for the story no actual training with his powers is very stupid and somehow gets over losing his only family like in one chapter it's a good origin for an antihero but this guy just becomes a plot device do not recommend

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    Accidentally Ate The Goro Goro No Mi Fruit In Marvel!
    Movies · Karate_master_b
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez7mth
    Replied to Zaztra_Vandesh

    is this based in a specific world or not cause recently I have been on a game of thrones fiction binge and the concept of a system based on Minecraft in game of thrones setting sounds interesting

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    Let's play Minecraft in a world of Swords and Spells
    Video Games · Zaztra_Vandesh
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez9mth
    Replied to rf102

    it should be a falcon

    Ch 7 DC-PHD-CH7
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    DC - Pocket Hunting Dimension
    TV · Krishna_Is_Here
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez10mth
    Commented

    bro just don't listen to comments it's that simple

    Ch 23 Deleting this after a few hours
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    Young Justice: Ghost
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez1yr
    Posted

    while it is an interesting concept I find that the author seems to be wary of deviating a bit to far from canon so the few chapters up is essentially inner monologue and the mc following the canon Harry's footsteps no asking the goblins about his accounts no buying extra books just essentially a bot hopefully it gets better

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    Super Harry Potter
    Movies · goldfish_korra
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez1yr
    Replied to Leylin_Farlier99

    ugh I regret everything

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    NotHere
    Anime & Comics · ToFFieKop
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez1yr
    Commented

    nnnnnnnnooooooooo why this was such a good story and well written there were a few small tweaks that could be done to make it better but overall this was a solid story with so much potential how could you kill it😭😭😭😭😭👻👻

    A/N (This is all I have at this point. The hate I got for this doesn't make me want to keep writing. So, if someone else wants to pick it up I would be happy to read what you write. For those that enjoyed this do not expect any updates. But who knows I never thought I would post these latest chapters.)
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    HP Marvel Aquaman
    Movies · VatOfRedundancy
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez1yr
    Posted

    honestly it has a nice premise but the fact is that I'm not sure this is even English I read the first chapter and all I know is that a truck appeared or something

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    NBA: I, THE TEMPLATE OF AOMINE DAIKI!
    Others · Jeffrey_Nin
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez2yr
    Posted

    it was a good fic until he lost his arm you can't even call him metal bat you should just call it reincarnated with metal bats powers and due to my stupidity now a metal arm

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    Reborn Metal BAT on the MCU
    Movies · Marcelinho_Ggazeli
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez2yr
    Posted

    best novel so far props 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤🤯

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    Viltrumite In Marvel World
    Anime & Comics · Ashtin_Pratt
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez2yr
    Posted

    please do not drop I've been waiting and my life is becoming bleaker and bleaker without your fanfic.it was my favorite with a great background and premise and good character byplay and dialogue.one of the best fanfics I have ever read so please don't drop.

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    Dragon's Paradise (HPxMarvelUniverse) [Dropped]
    Book&Literature · LordRhyolith
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez2yr
    Replied to Ruined_Herrscher

    do you got a patreon account with extra chapters bro?

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    Dragon's Paradise (HPxMarvelUniverse) [Dropped]
    Book&Literature · LordRhyolith
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez2yr
    Posted

    this story is unreadable do yourself a favor and find a translator I don't know what language you are translating from but whatever source you are using to translate is garbage I read 3 chapters and I had know idea what I was reading not only that there are only like 6 actual chapters

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    Teen Wolf: As A King
    TV · God_Of_Shinobi
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez2yr
    Posted

    bruh don't drop this story it is one of the best. mc is not a beta and has huge potential though I would stop giving him power and let him master all the powers he already has maybe evolve a few also if you do keep this story going cause I'm not sure if you are even going to read this but I would do two more chapters on his current age then skip to him leaving shield.

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    A different SpiderMan in MCU AU
    Anime & Comics · Kyosuke_Uchiha
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez3yr
    Posted

    was good till he became a devil you made him into another beta mc and made him less relatable as a character not only that but sirius black was a freedom lover you tarnished his name by making him a slave to a girl that he was pretty much stronger than not only that he got beast soul a really dope magic that would go really well in this world with yokai and stuff but you then forgot about it and made the the cover picture have nothing to do with the story might as well put the cover pic as sona.

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    Gamer of Black
    Anime & Comics · stileto
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  • jesus_hernandez
    jesus_hernandez3yr
    Posted

    love this book it is amazing it is hard to find a book that meshes one aspect of ben ten without just making it a mix of the two original works

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    Appoplexian in marvel
    Anime & Comics · Smithsonian86_
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