The author here, I'll try to give my honest impression of the story. Writing Quality: 3/5 I'll be honest, while I think my writing is mediocre at best, it's improving. However, the sustenance that maintains that is my drive and motivation. Sometimes, It'll read like a drunken sailor, and other times, it may be four stars at best. My ability to convey a fictional setting isn't great, but I'm willing to improve, even if this is just for fun. This piece is more like an exercise for me as a writer. Stability of Updates: 3/5 It's going well so far, but I'll probably slow down as the story progresses. There's also research and maintaining characters and worlds that take time. However, I'll give it what I've got. Anyways, this novel will likely last around 30 chapters at the minimum, 50 at best. Well, that's if I don't lose motivation, but I can't promise anything. Story Development: 3/5 It's not the greatest since the story mostly flings around. However, I do make changes to the original setting and impart my design. That said, don't expect anything perfect. And also, the story follows more like an episode of loony tunes rather than a full-blown action-adventure series. There might be a bit of discontinuity with events, but they are understood and fledged by the characters. Character Design: 3/5 I like to flesh out my characters emotionally and physically. This aspect is done well in the right circumstances but poorly executed when it doesn't fit the story. You'll see pain, terror, cringe, and romance. The mixing and matching can be flimsy and sometimes confusing. However, I hope it makes sense if you understand the characters themselves. World Background: 3/5 Also, not great. You'll probably need to have already read up some stories for the implication. However, I try my best to be as cohesive and efficient as possible. That said, I may not execute my ideas flawlessly. I'll try to make the information as seamless and natural as can be. TLDR: 3-star book, come with mediocre expectations. Also, this review doesn't contain spoilers.

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Suffering comes after peace. Like, how a good horror mingles well with an innocent atmosphere.

That's a little overboard, even for me. However, I understand why you think that, but think of trolling as the main plot, and soon there will be subplots. It should fill the gap and not make everything too overwhelming.

Honestly, respectable decision. It get's a lot more disturbing than this though.

Astoflo looks like girl, but he is still guy. This will tie into the world he is in...

There you go, I assume you asked for this.

I'm ashamed I hadn't thought of this. Though, that would be quite brutal...