Bs

Boring

Im tired of reading about him not doing Anything. It was alright at first but it gets annoying after a while

Bruh these Last few chapters Were nine but filler. pointless

Is this a harem? I hope not

I believe thats more realistic than waking up thinking you are at a cosplay convention. Who wakes up at a random unfamiliar place and thinks “ohh i guess im at a cosplay convention”.

Is this mc a idiot?

Not gonna lie. i skipped the whole prelude

He really Didnt have to explian all that to those weaker than him

Its because people in cultivation novels have no brains

To much talking, to much questions. just do it

On an earlier chapter he said he wouldn’t let his knowledge from hIs past life hinder him in this one. but that Is exactly what he is doing in this chapter. What a hypocrite

IdK why he’s angry. if he wasn’t put in that world then he would’ve just been dead. he should be thankful for another chance at life

If you ate saying that devil fruit is weak then you don’t reall understand one piece. luffy’s power is only being made of rubber but he’s doing Pretty d*mn good against peopke woth way better power than his

Thats lame

I feel like jayden after all she done with guys should be more experienced. You writing her like she’s a virgin

She kinda is but its alright

Ill continue it as long as he Dont starT like men. will he start to like men?. please let me know so i wont have to waste my time

This story barley makes sense

Why