this just gave a whole new meaning to Skyrim lore lmao

"What nobility? oh you those corpses on the ground hahaha"

You're uninformed and talking about this like your a professional, 1st of all they are brothers not rival males therefore he doesn't HAVE to or WILL kill his own brothers children, 2nd of all there have been a number of prides with multiple males.

Wouldn't they know what they were if they've looked at their status screens even once? Unless you mean in the sense that they don't know exactly what it means to be lupines of remus

that was on purrpose right?

he's a professional corpse

MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY, REAL MEN DON'T LET THE WAIFU'S GET HURT!!!

Writing Quality is good, not a lot of spelling errors but when there are I usually just chuckle a bit since it looks so out of place. I just started reading this yesterday so i haven't noticed any long waits however from previous experience with the author and his after chapter comments i can see that his got good stability. Story development is nice for me since the tone of the story isn't edgy or dark or "realistic" which i've gotten tired and exhausted of when it comes to naruto fanfics, characters are given a nice showing not having the fan-made overly evil 3rd hokage. Honestly this novel has just been a breath of fresh air and very fun to read given me a lot of chuckles and laughs. Character design is great and is once again a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of other fanfics especially in naruto, If you're reading this and haven't read the novel then let me tell you that you'll love the grampa (probably unless you're no fun lol). Also I really like the 3rd hokage here he's been reduced to the dumbledore of naruto in most fanfics and that's just not true but most people are unwilling to think carefully when writing a fanfic so they jump on the evil character hype train. World Background is naruto so you know good but story hasn't done much to really expand the world which is fine but a 3 star is all this is getting unless author decides to expand the world if not then it's just the normal naruto world with the MC's clan due to his 3 wishes which is why its a 3 and not a 2. Overall This is a great fanfic i highly recommend.

What is your point? Any uzumaki still alive have no jutsus left from their clan only their chakra and kekkei genkai so your comment doesn't make sense

that's not a kid tho. That's a highly intelligent man dissecting your life and presenting what's wrong in your life. A lot of people would have her exact same reaction.

Elden ring and for honor references quite unexpected but awesome place to take fight techniques from

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Definity need an improvement if you want to actually write a good engaging story

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Wouldn't the biggest island title go to Elbaf?

thanks for the chapter

Hey I would like to know if you are ever gonna give an explanation of the devil fruit trials and if the MC will get one

Hey man i love your story so far and while it doesnt really bother me and ill continue reading the story i just wanted to say that there were only 16 crucible knights and its stated in the elden ring lore.

The writing quality was good I've seen stories that were completely unreadable on this site or just very hard to read translations I started reading the fanfic when it was already finished so i experienced no lack of updates so i gave a 5 even though the author notes lead me to believe otherwise. Story development was a nice twist away from the other countless MCU canon fanfics so it was refreshing. Character design was actually pretty good as everyone had their own personalities no matter how quirky or "non-canon" they were. As for world background the author only added a very obviously ripped off krypton but honestly its fine i didnt mind the ripoff and it was actually quite funny seeing how unserious the author was about the story. Honestly I enjoyed this fanfic even though the quality wasn't the best or even if there wasnt alot of dialogue and it was more like reading a summary than a story but anyway this fanfic has an ending and that's more than enough to give it atleast a chance. Author if you see this then i thank you for allowing us to read your work and i hope you continue growing your writing skills so that we can read even better fanfictions from you.