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GrayTree

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Things are complicated but simple

2019-03-30 JoinedAscension Island
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree3d
    Commented

    I think Adonis is the best written character here. You can tell that something is up with him. Alicia and Billy are wierd, both make little sense. Alicia is just plain dumb, and Billy is admonished for the least negative things he did. Like what is going on?

    As a result, Adonis, Billy, and Alicia became the sort of faces of the Alpha Class, and as for the Beta Squad, there were three major cliques.
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree3d
    Commented

    I don't remember seeing the EDGY tag on the novel

    'But this is the second time you've crossed me now. I'll have to ensure there isn't a third.'
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree3d
    Replied to atamix

    What's yours is mine and what's mine is mine.

    'But this is the second time you've crossed me now. I'll have to ensure there isn't a third.'
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree3d
    Commented

    I reallllllllly hope the dialoge gets better down the line.

    "Tch! What is this? Is it revenge because I'm no longer friends with you or anything like that? You brought it upon yourself."
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree3d
    Commented

    Betraying a friendship means the bro code is no longer in effect. Sorry buddy.

    "You… why are you doing this, huh? You clearly know how I feel about her!"
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree3d
    Commented

    I mean he let you go so i don't umderstand what you are saying right now. He's a bad because he wants to be a better person for a girl, what?

    Rey already knew his friend was an asshole, since he abandoned him, but he never thought he would be this far gone.
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree4d
    Commented

    They died in thheit original world, so do her actions mean she would rather be dead than here? If so, why doesn't she just off herselfe?

    'Maybe I can find a way to return home. I… I want to leave this world already.'
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree4d
    Commented

    I was wondering about that.

    'Yet here I am, completely alone, yet I'm not losing my shit…'
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree4d
    Commented

    Of course he doesn't feel anything when killing another living being. It's not as if he is just a normal teenager.

    Warm blood dripped on his skin as he pressed his fingers on the throat of the struggling creatures.
    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree9d
    Commented

    Nooo! Bring back my boy! And what were thoes powers at the end, I need to know.

    "I don't know what happened!" Jon replied with a tired face, "Failsafe is supposed to be wiped clean to prevent any Apocryphal influence from getting to my head."
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree1mth
    Commented

    You say that as if it's a bad thing. But I do agree with yoir decision. No need to spoil a good construct by forcing change at the end.

    This piece of lore was added in some recent trailer for a DLC in ESO and I am not that keen on adding any aspect of it to the story here since I am finalizing it all in my roadmap with no room for expansion. As for my personal opinion, the names Itheila and Mirrormoor scream Tolkin fan in my head.
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Replied to GrayTree

    Apologies for the cringe induced, I felt poetic

    And since I finally started sleeping properly in the past month, I got my Masters and worked as a screenwriter for a local entertainment show, and yeah… I AM A DAD!
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    These Lanist... I mean, tentecle creatures!

    "Hermaeus Mora sends his regards!"
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    Congradulations! 🍾I wish you many wonderful celebrations,to her many happy years,And may you all spill only of happiness born tears. Now don't drink too many beers, let loose many cheares. Don't forget to kiss yoir wife, for if she's happy so will be your life. GT

    And since I finally started sleeping properly in the past month, I got my Masters and worked as a screenwriter for a local entertainment show, and yeah… I AM A DAD!
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    Bearing Deadra with Deadric strategy. Simply briliant

    "Operation Hijack Twilight, commencing the second phase!" Jon called all his minions and then looked up, "Xikil, start up the Dread Engine. Today, the Dark Anchors shall hit Apocrypha!"
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    My dissapointment is immesurable and my day is improved. Wait this isn't how it's supposed to go!

    "Do you want to see my latest trick?" Jon asked, "I got it from a stupid mobile game ad."
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    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    Oh Jon... they got you too.

    "Konnichiwa, Hemaiosu-kun. Watashi wa Jon desu."
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    Unbelivable, to think a day would arrive when I would agree with Hermaius Mora.

    Moreover, Miraak even took control of the Summit of Apocrypha and commanded the Seekers and the Lurkers under Hermaeus Mora to serve him. What's next? Mantel Hermaeus Mora or some shit?
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree2mth
    Commented

    Congrats!!!

    A/n: Hey, guys. I'm back. Glad to say that I've finally got my Master's Degree with an excellent grade and moving on to PhD, it kept me occupied for the past month for sure! Happy to be back.
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • GrayTree
    GrayTree5mth
    Commented

    Actualy doesnt sound too bad, if only unprise.

    "When Jon and the big bad lizards swooshed into the sky, their fight was so intense and filled with mystical energy that the world couldn't help but turn them into greater versions of themselves so they could beat the crap out of each other in a mystical way." She said.
    altalt
    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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