CultivatingReader
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I'm happy you seem to be in good condition.
yes
nah get dawn
The writing quality is okay and thats all ot has going for it really, but I can't continue reading this story. The MC is a pedo, he's creeping on a child as a full grown adult, so what if he's in a child's body, it still doesn't make it right. I could have been okay with it if the overly apparent crush came along latter and not when there still in middle school. I repeat again, this is a FULL GROWN ADULT. creeping on a CHILD.
Dunmer?! In Skyrim. Breton are by far superior.
congrats man on both occasions.
I see what you did there.
people trafficking -> human trafficking.
I would have preferred Caenis, because muscles are hot.
Nothing really exciting, the writing quality is great, but that's all you can really give this story. This is not to say I didn't see something in this story, but I'll be honest Superman's negligence of Superboy was some of the best ways superman ever showed his humanity. Sure it sucked for Superboy, but eventually they grew together and became like brothers of close uncle and nephew relationship. This story decides to portray Superman as a deadbeat dad, and I find that to be dumb. Realize something people if Kara was in the universe she'd hate Superboy, at least Superman is taking it as best he can with what could only be the birth of a human rights violation. So to the author I have to drop this story, because who in their right minds chooses Black Canary over Superman?
You can't even bother to add at least a chapter describing his radical change from scientist to hitman. He was a scientst not some omni prodigy. Also you also mad him to good at everything, you think Dr. Erskine wouldn't notice such a balant perfectionists, he would very easily and very quickly come to not trust you because who would trust something that good in his circumstances. Also props for trying to create a no cheat character, but in a universe full of people far smarter, stronger, and better than you, don't try to use real world level geniuses when your nothing compared to Peter Parker not to mention people like Dr. Doom & Mr. Fantastic, your not even on the same level of intelligence as them when they were still in high school much less adults.
Congrats man.
please no
ressource -> resource